I really do hope he doesn't fall for anyone from the village well maybe ten-ten mainly because it did seem they had a friendly relationship.

Appreciate your work thanks.

Why are they all searching for him to bring him back? When he was there at the village it seemed only ten-ten was he's friend while no one else did anything for him what the hell? Let's just get naruto to fall in love with them it's pretty stupid.

Excellent update thank you

Great first chapter

I see that you began to get confused in your own characters. This is a group of kunoichi whom you introduced into story.
While you indicated Hitomi and Hisui in the first chapter, they did not even appear in the second when you represented all the women in the bar. Now it is not known where Satsuki and Kurenai came from, which until now were not in the plot.
These are very gross errors that you simply should have noticed when checking.
Decide already what characters you want to add to plot of your story, or do not abuse their number and the presence of OC. This very quickly introduces confusion in the narrative and also makes them useless in terms of the importance of their roles in the plot.
I want to say that you currently have a very much characters that seem out of place. Most of them don’t bring anything into the plot, which is why their role is depreciated, limited to only single phrases.
Leave only those that are vital for your plot and limit their number to the minimum so that they don’t get lost in the background and seem useless when it comes to actions or their direct participation. Each character has a role to play in the narrative and to contribute his share to the development of the story. If this does not happen, then they will simply continue to play the role of extras, only because their presence is important exclusively to author.
I can also see that some parts of your story, in particular from the first chapter, completely copy the story of “The Tale of the Fox's Sin of Greed”. For those who have already read it, they can immediately understand that the text almost completely copies the contents in some places. Perhaps this is not so scary at first glance, but it still makes you recommend that you remake them to at least slightly differ from each other.

Can't wait to see the fights next chapter. I am curious though, if this Escanor will have complete control over sunshine like Mael does since unlike canon Escanor who was a normal human, this one is an Uzumaki with magic, chakra and kyuubi chakra. Also does this Escanor look like his canon version or a combination of Naruto and Escanor. I just find it weird if he looks like a middle aged man like canon since Uzumaki are know for their youth and longevity.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

I love this story

Please update

Great chapter.
Thanks for the continuation.
Very good development of the plot.
A few minor naming and nickname / nickname errors, but still very enjoyable.
Keep it up and Greetings.

hey great update keep up the good work

can't wait to see the next update

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and how the reunion will go

Hopefully you can update more nowヾ(**)ﾉヾ(**)ﾉヾ(**)ﾉ

Hmmm... interesting.

great chapter.