Reviews for Don't Back Down Again
Louena4ever chapter 12 . 7/27
So in this chapter has moonvaision not happened?! They are in their teens and webby and dewy are arguing about if aliens are real when they have faced off against them?!

WHAT DO YOU MEAN

Is your story not have the series as cannon?
darkness chapter 27 . 7/20
A FACE REVEAL? What has Jordan done to you? A face reveal? Are you SURE that you want to do this? I mean, it's a face reveal, so you'll be revealing your face to anyone who happens to look at your profile. ANYONE. Literally anyone.
Eh, I'm sure you've considered everything, right?

Ah, so Louie is having a dream about DT-17! Ooh, what if they have a DT-17 security bot? Anyway, I forgot how the 1987 universe works again. It must be hard for you to remember and switch the characters' personalities. What does 1987 scrooge sound like again? All I can remember is Scrooge's vioce from Ducktales: Remastered, but they made that game in 2013! Also, you had to describe the art style for 2017! How long did that take? I definitely couldn't do that.
Uhh... Gandra seems calmer than I would be if I put on some headphones and a texture pack was suddenly activated. But why is she getting the nightmares and the glitches. Is she possesed? Sorry, I can't remember anything. Will Fenton be affected too?
And also... LOUIE, HURRY UP! ...But why can Goldie see the glitches? She's possesed, right? Will everyone get the nightmares and glitches? I MUST KNOW!
Lilbree chapter 27 . 7/20
I'm glad your family is getting better Jo! :D So happy for you!

Wow! This chapter! I... So many emotions! My heart! It's too full! Seriously! Louie's dream made me tear up a bit and the Last Crash scene along with the separation scene made it worse.
But I'm glad that we finally get to see Louie remember, that's awesome! Just remember Louie, less than 2 days please.

On the other hand, Louie isn't the only one remembering, Goldie and Gandra does too. And since Scrooge said he is having nightmares too, can we say he's on the list too? I'm a little doubtful about that bc.. the carefree way in which he reacted makes me wonder if his nightmares were just the common ones, nothing related with his other life, or maybe he just doesn't care at all? Idk, I found this kinda weird...
Also, I hope we'll get to see the others remember too.

I see Gandra is the one getting closer to remember everything also the one who suffers the most, poor her but that's actually a good thing, I think... Man! I'm so curious to know how her life will be from now on...

I'm going crazy! This chapter was AWESOME! I love these story so so so much! Best story ever! I'm never gonna get tired of thanking you :'3 3
Average Everyday Sane Psycho chapter 27 . 7/20
great update
GiddyReflections chapter 27 . 7/19
I like the way this order of chapters turned out. Loved this chapter so much! Sweet little Louie!

Also, got an idea for what LIOZ stands for. Louie In Oz? Nope, definitely NOT it. Um... Lollipops In/On Zoup (Soup)? Jk, I've got no clue, lol.
Jpbake chapter 27 . 7/19
Oh man oh man, Louie is now getting his memory back and he is not alone, Gandra and Goldie is getting them too. It's only a matter of time before they all get their memories and they defeat those SOB's trying to destroy them.
FWI I might be a soft panda bear but I can turn into a papa grizzly really quick especially if you try to hurt my niece.
You are going to do a face reveal once you hit 300 reviews? I might do the same when you reveal yours.
Lastly I am going to publish my Ducktales stories in about 2 weeks and I would love it if you promoted the hell out of it in order to get people to read it. I just uploaded the last chapter of Twilight's Reign and will my Ducktales story is the next story up. Keep an eye out and advertise it.
Peace out
Angelwings2002 chapter 27 . 7/19
Glad you are feeling okay, and don’t feel too pressured about posting on Saturday, take care of yourself and loved ones first. Loved seeing more of Gandra, (I’m betting all of my savings she is gonna reforming season 3. Incase that wasn’t obvious, lol) and loved the flashbacks in the beginning. It’s interesting to think of this as the almost first chapter, and while it would have been unique, I think you made the right choice. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Unknown chapter 27 . 7/19
I'm glad you're all feeling better. Continue to stay safe!
Yes! Don't ignore the dreams Louie! Neither should you Gandra! Sure your lives there are a little messed up (especially for you Gandra), but it will work out!
I'm still wondering about Violet in this world. Where is she? And how will Webby and the triplets meet her here? AND WHAT WILL HER 1987 PERSONA BE LIKE?!
"Comic book style," kind of a fourth wall break, but a good way to describe their world.
We must be close to the climax of your story now Jo! You're fanfics are the best Ducktales fanfics I have read! KEEP GOING GIRL!
Disney Boy chapter 27 . 7/19
Wow. I wonder if we'll see the other reactions from everyone on then other side. Also you may have to owe us an extra chapter to make up for the one you missed two weeks ago like you did before. Also when I brought up the idea for Violet I figured that she would be sent down two the other world but not effected by what's affecting everyone else. This plays into how they will be saved as she'll make them regain their memories and realize the truth. Meanwhile Zues tries to go after Louie, Lena, and Boyd unaware that the other two may not be effected if he sends them to the other side. As for what I originally had for Morlock it would he that he survived the events of the movie and after a version of Donald Duck Going Quackers which combines all the versions he gets sent to Dimension Z which is actually the realm of illusion which leads to Legend of Illusion where he tries to make himself more powerful by killing the tree of life so that he could concur both that world and his but was stopped by that worlds version of Mickey. After making back to his world he decides to travel to another world for assistance and teaches this worlds Magica to be who she is now. Eventually he was imprisoned by Hades but thanks to Magica escaped this leading to this story. I und if you don't want to do it though so just modify it into 2017 Merlock meeting the original Merlock and the two began planning the events that would follow.
RANDOM chapter 1 . 7/18
Ok, this story started off as a happy adventure time! Now it's just pure terrifying. Like hell man terrifying. Being trapped in your own mind, blood, emotional manipulation? Yeah, this is so close to crossing the T rating. It's scary!

Oooo

"You can't be serious," one of Jordan's brothers was at Jordan's room. The youngest prince came back home after what happened but before he could even get a word out, his father grounded him, "You snuck out for a festival and met a girl you liked? What is this, a start to a fairy tale story?"

"I know I know, but I just wanted to see the festival," Jordan tried to say, "It only happens once a year. Then I mistook a male yak for a female yak, tried to milk it and one thing led to another. But none of that matters. What matters is this."

Jordan pulled out the duck necklace from his pocket and showed it to his brother.

"A wooden duck carving?" His brother raised a brow.

"I remember that day. When our kingdom and the villagers were at war, I was knocked out in the water and someone saved me. I saw this necklace on the one who saved me and it's been my only clue to finding that person. The girl with the performers had this with her. That girl has to be the one that saved me. I have to see the girl again," Jordan almost sounded like he was pleading with his brother.

"I'm hearing a lot of ' girl ' Did you not get her name?" His brother asked him. Jordan was about to say something but when he realized he did not in fact get her name, nothing came out. His brother chuckled at Jordan's actions "Unbelievable, and you want to find this girl?"

"I just want to thank her for not letting me die that day," Jordan said a little uncertain.

"Just for that reason?" His brother asked with a little teasing. Jordan sat back down on his bed and looked at the ground. It didn't take his brother long to know what he was thinking, "I'm not shaming you. If you finally found a girl you want to court, then let's Cinderella this thing."

"What?" Jordan looked at him with a lot of confusion.

"The necklace is your only clue right? Let's find the girl this necklace belongs to." His brother said.

"And how are we going to do that?" Jordan asked.

At a tent, the performers were all gathered outside, shouting in excitement and screaming in joy.

"Sheesh, what's going on? It's 5 am!" Jp yawned as he got out of his tent followed by T.G. Jo and Rebey came out too and huddled at the group. Everyone was passing around a new paper.

"Let me see," Rebey took it and read it out loud, "A ball will be held at the castle this weekend to help the youngest prince find a girl to court. He will personally pick someone based on any conversation he has. If you meet his requirements he will happily ask for your permission to court."

"Is this why everyone is so excited?" Jp sounded confused as to why tgere was so much screaming over this.

"Aahhhh, it's a ball!" T.G squealed a high pitch squeal when he read the paper, "And it's open to the public! We can put on a performance in front of thousands! Think of the exposure and reputation we'll get!"

"We are so going!" Rebey happily agreed. As everyone was shouting in happiness, Jo stayed quite, her face filling with concern.

"Jo," Jp noticed this and walked to her.

"He's hunting me down," Jo gulped.

"What?" Jp didn't understand.

"He's hunting me down. He has my necklace, he knows I'm a villager! If I go to the ball he'll find me and I'll be taken away! I can't go!" Jo sounded like she was about to get a heart attack.

"Hey relax, we won't go if you don't want to," Jp placed his hands on her shoulders to calm her down.

"Actually, it's mandatory," Rebey pulled up the paper, "Soliders will be marching across the streets and if there's a girl who isn't at the ball, they escort her to the castle themselves. So whether you want to or not, we all have to go."

Jo nearly fainted from all the pressure. Jp held her up and tried to think of a way out of this. Nothing came to his mind, Jo was trapped.

"Hey, what's the worry?" A boy with exaggerated clothing asked. He wasn't a performer, but the costume designer who came up with everything they wore on stage. Ninjatana was what they called him. (I'm assuming he's a boy, don't murder me!)

"Jo is dead. The second the prince sees her, he's going to get her hanged," T.G said right away, no problem. Ninjatana looked at the group for a while. Seeing just how scared Jp and Jo were, he looked at the paper again and studied every word.

"You know, it doesn't say anything about a dress code," he pointed out. Everyone was all ears at this. Inside Ninjatana tent was rows of masks he was designing. He gestured towards the all like it was a grand reveal, "Tada! These were suppose to be used for our performance next week but these masks are just too gorgeous to not be seen at a royal ball."

"Oooooohhhhh Ahhhhhhh!" Rebey squealed at the sight like a little girl in a room full of puppies. She picked a mask that had the name Rebey taped above it. A pink mask that covered half her face vertically. It looked like half a heart, "So pretty!"

"I'm guessing this is mine," Jo didn't need to look at the name when she found a mask that covered most of her face, even half her cheeks. The only part visible were her lips. The mask was snow white with white feathers decorated around it. Obviously representing a duck.

"Ducks is your thing," Ninjatana chimed.

"I gotta say, this will look very elegant at the castle," T.G found his, that was purple on one side and black on the other. A top hat with a long purple ribbon wrapped around it and hanged off the side.

"This could actually work," Jp felt relieved that Jo could possibly be safe at the castle. He took his mask that resembled a reindeer, even his top hat had elegant designed antlers on them, "We won't be overdressed will we?"

"Honey, we're theater people!" Ninjatana declared, "We live for being over the top! We show the world who we are through our movements and style! They'll wish they were us when I'm finished with these masterpieces."
Lilbree chapter 26 . 7/13
Noooo baby blue! Hurry up Louie! 2 more days! That's all you have! At least I'm seeing you're getting closer to remember, I knew that ring was going to help you Louie.
Also I see Gandra is remembering! Nice! Hopefully there'll be more hints that can help the others remember too.
And the flashback about Abigor and Lizzette ancestors helped to undertand a lot of things.

About your family... I'm so sorry Jo, just be positive and very patient, you all are going to get through this together... Have faith and be strong for them. My best wishes for you and your family
darkness chapter 26 . 7/12
Ah, the UnderWorld. That makes it sound like a theme park! (Sorry, I'm not trying to call you out on writing it like that.)
Anyway, Huey seems suprisingly calm. He's usually one to freak out... wait. is he still possessed? Who isn't possessed? I forgot.
When it switched to 1987, I had a moment of confusion. I asked myself "What do the triplets sound like again? They all wear hats, right?" Yeah, I've been watching too much 2017. Also, LOUIE! DO SOMETHING! You're our only hope!
As for your mental state, this pandemic has been rough for all of us. I've been kind of like that. Unmotivated. Tired. Emotionless. During online schooling, I felt overworked, even though I didn't have much work at all. It probably didn't help that I checked the pandemic stats every day. A few months ago, we only had 600 cases in the US. The next day, we had 1000! Aaand now... three million. And I kept procrastinating, and just went on, in the same cycle. Stare at a screen for five hours. Eat lunch. ehhhhh... What am I writing? Anyway, it's kind of an endless loop. (By now, I'm just making depressing statements) The only way to get out of the whirlpool is by staying inside it. Those tips to help you during quarentine dont help. Make a schedule? Uhhh... I just want to lay in bed and do nothing... so how to distract yourself? Find a hobby. Or just force yourself to do whatever you need to do. Probably not the most healthy option, but right now, we're surviving on the bare minimum.
I'm guessing none of that helped you.
Jpbake chapter 26 . 7/12
Two days, that's all Louie has to get his memory back as well as the memory of his family and friends before Dewey is lost forever. No pressure Louie no pressure at all. (Sarcasm. There's a lot of pressure here. DON'T YOU DARE LET ME DOWN LOUIE OR I WILL UNLEASH A PUNISHMENT ON YOU WORST THAN WHATEVER MERLIN HAS IN STORE.).
Ok I'm calm now.
Angelwings2002 chapter 26 . 7/12
*hands you a pillow and blanket* You deserve some rest and I hope the rest of your family gets better too. Also this was a great chapter! I loved the little details such as Gandra looking at the headphones. I knew she would! Keep up the good work! And don’t worry about this story as much. We can all be patient!
GiddyReflections chapter 26 . 7/11
"We'll accomplish our goal if we just sit down and talk this through." Oh, evil Huey. I think the goal he and Scrooge have in mind is a little different from Donald and Della's. Nice little gesture.

Also, I was wondering when those headphones would come into play. Gandra's starting to remember!

I'm wondering what LOIZ stands for. I bet it's important if you mentioned it. Another great chapter! Hope you stay healthy and sane. Hang in there!

An encouraging Bible verse to get you through the week:

Cast your cares on the LORD and he will sustain you; he will never let the righteous be shaken. ~Psalm 55:22
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