| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Grocery Run |
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  flying-octopus chapter 9 . 7/7 Enjoyed the story! The OC's were integrated well enough that I actually read the OC-only parts (unlike other works). Was initially confused at the handling of the traitorous duo (they are too childish and cartoon-ish) but found the charm of their characterization as well as the well enough ending to them. Good enough dose of drama which spiced the romance parts. Overall, a solid story (except the usual banes of fanfiction like grammar and the likes - not too much to detract, though). I wish you the best to your future writing endeavors! |
 Beyondthesea16 chapter 9 . 7/7 nice ending |
| 19Shorty chapter 9 . 7/7 What a wonderful ending for the story will there be a sequel to this story |
| Davinius Gerard Fogg chapter 9 . 7/7 Really loved this. well done. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/5 darcy is a girls name, why did they call their son that? |
| ghosttown66 chapter 9 . 7/6 What a lovely end to an original story, at least the approach to the story. I love the fact that there is an end. Too many great stories die a silent death because the muse took a holiday or the fact that it was dragged to long and lost appeal. Thank You |
| c.karen09 chapter 9 . 7/6 This was beautiful, and I enjoyed every word. Thank you so very much for writing and sharing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 9 . 7/5 Un Maravilloso Final Para Una Maravillosa Historia! Me Encanto M Perfecto! De Verdad Maravilloso |
| Shaitan Elnefi chapter 9 . 7/5 Glad to see a great ending to this one. Bit bummed that you didn’t write the meetings with the ministry. Sounded like they would have been a lot of fun to read |
| TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 9 . 7/5 Wonderful end to a wonderful story. Thank you and good luck out there. |
| SarahFurey chapter 9 . 7/5 I'm sad it's over and glad it ended w/ so much warmth and happiness. :) Thank you |
| rubyred753 chapter 8 . 7/5 Oooh, Ron got his due and then some! Just a shame no one knows he is finally gone, it would be a relief for some of his previous targets/victims.. |
| Homarid chapter 8 . 7/5 Well that was a chapter. I think ron needs a real mental health professional. Everyone is too busy hating or exploiting him though, pity. I guess he earned it. Thank you for the update. This felt a little like an epilogue. Will the be much more story? |
| c.karen09 chapter 8 . 7/5 Wow. I don't think anyone could ever come up with a worse punishment for this troll, and you could probably get work as a vengeance demon. I also loved our heroes' new mode of transportation, as well as their happy family doubling in size. Any chance the healing bath could allow Mummy Granger to have another baby? That would just be the cherry on top. Thank you very much for another wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 8 . 7/4 Fuc#! Ciertamente No Me Lo Esperaba! Fantástico! Me Encanto |
