Reviews for You thought the protagonist was Issei, but it was I, DIO(dora)! |
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bloobloo2334 chapter 1 . 1/11 Hmm, cool idea, not sure about the execution though. Why would a grown man get offended that he's being compared to his siblings? Matter of fact, why would it take him so long to talk fluently? Did he have to re-learn the language? Seems like the author wants to write both an SI story and just a story with a normal child. It's really jarring. The concept is a cool idea though. |
dragonfighter11 chapter 5 . 10/31/2019 was this abandoned? |
LeBomb chapter 1 . 10/13/2019 devil magic is better. devils can use human spells but humans can't use devil spells |
TehStorm chapter 5 . 10/10/2019 Good story,i hope to see the MC becoming really powerful by canon time. |
Br9k3n chapter 1 . 8/28/2019 I hope you will continue the story |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/25/2019 Like the over all concept. It's well written and formatted. I don't really get why you had to mention your religion at the first chapter as it doesn't really add Jack shit to the story... I do genuinely like the character you made of diodora. It's not often that I can say that of ocs and si s. I also like your integration of our fav 2 nekoushou, there by also avoiding the nekoushou massacre that would have come from kuroka going stray for shirone. I look forward to seeing who else you decide to recruit and why as well as what the effects of your recruiting are on those of rias. |
Guest-Questioner chapter 5 . 8/10/2019 One thing, GRAMMAR, sir/madam, writer! GRAMMAR, GRAMMAR, GRAMMAR! so long as that problem continues too exist, then, not much positive feedback too be given. |
Just some random chapter 1 . 8/10/2019 I won't be reading this, as it is out of my tastes for fics. Still a very interesting concept though, I implore you to keep this up because many people will enjoy this. |
look2019 chapter 5 . 8/10/2019 I liked the chapter! |
Maou chapter 5 . 8/10/2019 when Rias goes after Gasper and Kiba DIO could go along to get what he wants but I disagree with Akeno's, could find someone better for DIO's peerage. for example Walburga and Lavinia Reni and Jeane. Ps:the name is Rizevim Livan Lucifer |
MOR the Divine Being chapter 5 . 8/11/2019 Ugandan Knuckle as Pawn, make it happen |
Rodvek97 chapter 5 . 8/11/2019 Good Chapter |
issei dragon chapter 5 . 8/11/2019 Great chapter |
Tobi is a Gooder Boy chapter 5 . 8/10/2019 Mom: I’m pregnant! ;) ... Ajuka: Neat...inwardly(SUCK IT SIRZECHS, SERAFALL! I WILL HAVE AN ARMY OF KAWAII SIBLINGS MUAHAHAHAHA) Dad: But the condoms allowed me to cheat pregnancy, how could this be?!(brownie points for the reference) DIO-DORA(my god o. O): WWRRRYYYYYYYYYY! Mom: I think Diavolo would be a nice name with it meaning devil- DIO-doradoradora: JOJO! Mom: Dio hun- DIO: JONATHAN! *Glares intensely at Mom’s swelling stomach growls* JoJo...Your attempts of becoming the main isekaid protagonist will be completely MUDA compared to the mighty Diodora! We shall meet in 9 months..GUDBUY JOJO! Oof that whole script was pure cringe lol. But I couldn’t help myself lmao. Kuroka and Shirone as DIO-SAMA’s personal Neko girl makes, huh? You naughty boy ;). Kuroka especially is a real Killer Queen whose beauty can give you a Sheer Heart Attack and make any other competitors Bite Za Dust! But seriously, love the changes to canon! Rias is getting her own harem, hmm? Riser is still a bit further than Diodora, but o wow wut a coinkidoink Diodora has a full set of mutation pieces! Ajuka confirmed best JoBro? ... ARRIVEDERCI |
Lazymanjones96 chapter 5 . 8/10/2019 Interesting stuff looking forward to more |