Reviews for You thought the protagonist was Issei, but it was I, DIO(dora)!
bloobloo2334 chapter 1 . 1/11
Hmm, cool idea, not sure about the execution though. Why would a grown man get offended that he's being compared to his siblings? Matter of fact, why would it take him so long to talk fluently? Did he have to re-learn the language?

Seems like the author wants to write both an SI story and just a story with a normal child. It's really jarring. The concept is a cool idea though.
dragonfighter11 chapter 5 . 10/31/2019
was this abandoned?
LeBomb chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
devil magic is better. devils can use human spells but humans can't use devil spells
TehStorm chapter 5 . 10/10/2019
Good story,i hope to see the MC becoming really powerful by canon time.
Br9k3n chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
I hope you will continue the story
Guest chapter 5 . 8/25/2019
Like the over all concept. It's well written and formatted. I don't really get why you had to mention your religion at the first chapter as it doesn't really add Jack shit to the story...

I do genuinely like the character you made of diodora. It's not often that I can say that of ocs and si s. I also like your integration of our fav 2 nekoushou, there by also avoiding the nekoushou massacre that would have come from kuroka going stray for shirone.

I look forward to seeing who else you decide to recruit and why as well as what the effects of your recruiting are on those of rias.
Guest-Questioner chapter 5 . 8/10/2019
One thing, GRAMMAR, sir/madam, writer!

GRAMMAR, GRAMMAR, GRAMMAR!

so long as that problem continues too exist, then, not much positive feedback too be given.
Just some random chapter 1 . 8/10/2019
I won't be reading this, as it is out of my tastes for fics. Still a very interesting concept though, I implore you to keep this up because many people will enjoy this.
look2019 chapter 5 . 8/10/2019
I liked the chapter!
Maou chapter 5 . 8/10/2019
when Rias goes after Gasper and Kiba DIO could go along to get what he wants but I disagree with Akeno's, could find someone better for DIO's peerage. for example Walburga and Lavinia Reni and Jeane.
Ps:the name is Rizevim Livan Lucifer
MOR the Divine Being chapter 5 . 8/11/2019
Ugandan Knuckle as Pawn, make it happen
Rodvek97 chapter 5 . 8/11/2019
Good Chapter
issei dragon chapter 5 . 8/11/2019
Great chapter
Tobi is a Gooder Boy chapter 5 . 8/10/2019
Mom: I’m pregnant! ;)
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Ajuka: Neat...inwardly(SUCK IT SIRZECHS, SERAFALL! I WILL HAVE AN ARMY OF KAWAII SIBLINGS MUAHAHAHAHA)
Dad: But the condoms allowed me to cheat pregnancy, how could this be?!(brownie points for the reference)
DIO-DORA(my god o. O): WWRRRYYYYYYYYYY!
Mom: I think Diavolo would be a nice name with it meaning devil-
DIO-doradoradora: JOJO!
Mom: Dio hun-
DIO: JONATHAN! *Glares intensely at Mom’s swelling stomach growls* JoJo...Your attempts of becoming the main isekaid protagonist will be completely MUDA compared to the mighty Diodora! We shall meet in 9 months..GUDBUY JOJO!

Oof that whole script was pure cringe lol. But I couldn’t help myself lmao. Kuroka and Shirone as DIO-SAMA’s personal Neko girl makes, huh? You naughty boy ;). Kuroka especially is a real Killer Queen whose beauty can give you a Sheer Heart Attack and make any other competitors Bite Za Dust!

But seriously, love the changes to canon! Rias is getting her own harem, hmm? Riser is still a bit further than Diodora, but o wow wut a coinkidoink Diodora has a full set of mutation pieces! Ajuka confirmed best JoBro?
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ARRIVEDERCI
Lazymanjones96 chapter 5 . 8/10/2019
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
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