Great chapter
Thank you for Updating

this is really good , continue with the good work

I think to make this story have greater potential as it already has potential, is to put in a bit of action in it

Please continue. This is really good!

Well I personally think you need to have a bit more time establishing events and what not. Some of the scenes in this story feel to rushed and some of the stuff in story like that guy showing up in gwen’s Apartment isn’t really explained enough. Like why is he there, was he stalking her, and what is the relation ship between these two?