I really think you should focus on the other stories like the Rat Goddess and Migou Queen stories. Don't wanna leave them half finished!

Another great chapter!

Well, damn, that was fast.

A lot of tells and not enough shows. Invert the ratio of the show and tell and you have a perfect story. It also naturally lengthens a chapter more often than not.

I also think the full description of each Tager was too much. Short descriptions would have sufficed and then details could be added later in "show" method.

Mixing Worm and Cthulhu is definitely fun. There arent enough eldritch-Worm crossovers imo.

I feel like there was more you could have done with this opening chapter, but it was interesting enough. Will be waiting for new updates.

Sincerely,
Akallas

Odd, but has some interesting potential.

Interesting. I'd just like to point out it might be better to finish some of your other stories before starting a new one. Just saying.

Well RIP to the Worms and their Shards as well as those that are hosts to the parasites. TAGERS, well it was good to know you shadow stalker, eidolon, alexandria, mr SCION, have a good trip to the void.

Got me hooked, there's not much Cthulhutech fics out there so I'm excited on where this is headed

Tell me you won't be writing the entire story like this.

Interesting so far, haven't seen many cuthullutech stories out there, keep it up! I enjoyed it