this is so beautifull

this is such a beautifully sentimental short story. it is soft, sweet, and slow as it is meant to be seen as. you can feel the tension through the author's diction. this is so incredibly perfect and still causes some anxiety to keep you from falling asleep just imagining this peaceful atmosphere. this reminds me of the future that i plan to have with my childhood friend. thank you for writing this story, because it has done nothing but allow me to drift into a warm headspace and improve the way that i can react to these kind of mind-melting, terribly human moments that i might have

Very creative, all too often you see these stories end with an 'I love you' or something like that, so it's always refreshing to see something different :)