Dude, you really need to work in your writing skills and English comprehension. The idea and plot of this story looks good but if it's unreadable like this, then the story will go downhill

Awesome story bro!

This is sooooo goood more please!

Nice. Good work so far. though you'll need to work on your spelling skills. The grammarly app helps with spelling as well as grammar. It might be worth your time

Imagine. Not imagen

This is good

Perfect and update soon please
Cain x harem

So far this has been a canon re-write from exactly the same perspective with only a few extra lines of dialogue and minor phrase changes. No expanding on morality or his struggle to cope with the situation, no minor actions that would come about from the change in psyche brought on by having a bullsh*t op character instead of one merely 'ok' in PVP, no questioning the implication of the NPC behaviour, and not even putting any emphasis on trying to find the other members of Ainz Ooal Gown who, from what little you HAVE changed, would mean a lot more to him now than they did even in the original, in which one viable theory is that their memory and the NPCs they left behind are the only thing keeping him going. I could go on.

I apologise if this offends you, but I find the apparent lack of depth frustrating.

I suggest using CZ (that's her name right?) Or Rubedo for his adventurer partner.

this story is amazing I love it and I would definitely enjoy an Enri/Cain pairing you don't really see any also I think rubedo would be a good idea of who to bring along but those are my opinions I'll read and enjoy whatever you decide on

Try having lupusregina as Cain partner.

I hope to have enri interested in cain also lets see some evil eye love

A little to clise to canon to stomach, try using his Vamphiric atributes more than just Ainz regular spell repertoire.

Almost the same as canon but still enjoyable

What does cain look like that's my only complaint
But good start btw