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Mhm

Character development time

you have my attention, now let us hope you do not give up before the story ends.

Omg i cant wait xD all those horrors being introduce to power unprepared children that think they know paranormal things ahahhah
Amazing work ! I love it so much thanks a lot fpr the story
I ll wait for the next chapter with great impatience

Not too dark at all, after all it is the scp universe. I would say the 11 years old feel a bit too old in their way of thibking and speaking but for hailey and hermione it can be explain
By their upbringing, and you explain that you were writing everyone more OP to fit with the universe so i can roll with that. I m off toward the last chap ! Thabks for this story :)

Just to start with, I love this story and it's premise. That being said, I do have several issues with your characterization of the SCP Foundation. Mainly, it's how inefficient you've made them. They wouldn't wipe the memories of Neville and Ron and lock Hailey away, she's a wizarding national icon. She was in school for weeks, and people would ask Ron and Neville about where their friend went. At most, they'd use their influence to make the "blue light" part of the reason she survived Voldemort and just say she had a panicked burst of accidental magic that allowed her to ignore the anti-apparition wards at a cost (probably a faked coma for a week).

Just keep in mind that you're in a universe where there's literal magic everywhere, and spells are being created and changed daily. Remember how intent changes magic? The patronus is a canon example of how spells change between each user. Any of her anomalous abilities could quite literally be handwaved away as "magic" or a result of her interaction with and survival of the death curse. It would be easy to retconn it as the Foundation using the idea to threaten Hailey to keep her powers a secret as much as possible; and she just sees the worst possible outcome as the only option, hence she panics.

Totally missed this story love the updates hope your well and keep up the amazing story

That was fun.

Ha! It's no normal knife. It's Chekhov's Knife!

Fair enough. However, I still feel like the Foundation should have calmed down a bit after confirming that the leak didn't go beyond Ron and Neville because, at that point, Amnestics would have been a perfectly viable option. Also, barring betrayal from the Secret Keeper, how could the Fidelius, a charm for KEEPING a secret, be used to cause a leak?

Genuinely enjoyable chapter. They've all been great so far but I really enjoyed how this specific chapter has been written like an actual report from the SCP site. You make it appear really legit and it helps the readers (or at least me) become more invested. Good job!

Love the violence! Great job

Ron didn't say the thing... Eh maybe next time

I don't think it too dark, mainly due to the material used is darker than this. Just my opinion.