nice... it's really parental

This was so cute. Love parental RoyEd.

Don't you also write RoyEd shoto fics on AO3? I hope that's not true and that you really do love the parental dynamic between these two...

Holy crap wow, this story was so good and such a tear jerker. Keep it up!

This was insanely good! I loved Ed flipping out about getting his shots and Roy being the only one to calm him down. Also, Roy? Listening to and helping Al? To get his brother to take care of himself? Is that some Parental!RoyAl that I so desperately crave? I think it is!
Overall, this fic was fantastic and I can't believe it's your first FMA fic. I certainly hope to see more from you soon!

I honestly love this so freaking much

omg you have no idea how long i have been SEARCHING for a parental roy fic this good! LITERALLY YEARS. I smiled, teared up, and omg. I don't know what to say. You captured both the characters so well, YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE OF THEM TOGETHER AHHH YOURE SO AMAZING
The way roy brought up trisha omg I audibly gasped.

Thank you so much for writing this! I look forward to what you write in the future!

Wow. I don’t normally leave reviews seeing as I don’t have an account, but this story is one of the best that i’ve read in a really long time about parental roy & ed. Really really really great job!

I just had to say that this is one of the best parental Roy fics I have ever read. It's everything I have ever wanted between the two, and I'm absolutely in love. You did such an amazing job at this, I almost cried reading it.
Please keep writing more of the two of them! You are one of the best parental roy writers I have come across in probably YEARS
Keep up the good work

This story was absolutely beautiful! Ahh! I’m all about Parental Roy and Ed stories, they are some of my favorites! Thank you for writing a beautiful fan fic for everyone to read, it is amazing!

That was absolutely beautiful! I loved it! The characters were amazingly written and incharacter!

Everyone is in character here, excellent writing! I like the reasoning as to why Ed was so afraid too. It makes sense that he would be traumatized by that. You did a good job of humanizing both Ed and Roy as well, and the speech about fearlesness was very heartwarming, although Parental Roy/Ed usually is. Overall, amazing work. :)