Reviews for League of Exceptional Louds
Nick Name chapter 8 . 5/17
Sorry, I forgot the Casagrandes weren't superheroes in this story. Or at least not ALL of them, if my hunch is right.
Nick Name chapter 8 . 5/17
The villain team names I came up with are for Masters of Evil/Legion of Doom/Sinister Six/Brotherhood of Evil/Secret Society type teams for the Louds and Casagrandes to fight against.

Knaves of Wrath (The Grapes of Wrath novel)
Wicked League
Villain Strike Force (from Muscle Fish's Sushi Strike Force)
Deadly Seven (from seven deadly sins)
Eight Terrors (instead of eight wonders of the world)
Pandemonium of Crime/Associates of Crime (both from "Napoleon of Crime")
Rioters
Guest chapter 4 . 4/29
Question: will Tetherby's butler Bates become involved?
Guest chapter 8 . 4/9
I tried looking it up, but what is an Aak snake?
LoudVillainsSong chapter 3 . 4/8
LORD TETHERBY
Gosh, it's such a hoot to see them quaking
Once I win, they'll treat me with respect
I can't wait to watch their poor hearts breaking
So much for politically correct

Up till now, I've pulled my punches
I intend to eat their lunches
No more Mr. Nice Guy
Not for me

If you think that I'm hard-hearted
Well I tell you, I haven't even started
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
No more Mr. Nice Guy
No siree

LORD TETHERBY
Soon as we've captured our targets
I'll corner the super hero market
As for the League, well that's tragic
'Cause I'm going back
ALL
To my business tactics

Good behavior, it's so much duller
Time to show my one true color
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
Baby, Mr. Nice Guy's
History

LORD TETHERBY
Vengeance is what I believe in
I don't get mad, I get even
Politely I asked to join, but they won't let me
So I'll trap and replace them, it's my guarantee

Up to no good, I love plottin'
'Cause I'm so good when I'm rotten
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
No more Mr. Nice Guy
Wait and see...

CHORUS
Wait and see

LORD TETHERBY
I'll become that nasty, naughty
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
Petty, spiteful
LORD TETHERBY
Wicked, wayward
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
Way-delightful
LORD TETHERBY
Bad guy I was born to be

WESLEY
One more time!

LORD TETHERBY
Lying, loathesome
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
Never-tender
LORD TETHERBY
Indiscreet
LORD TETHERBY & CHORUS
Repeat offender
LORD TETHERBY
No more Mr. Nice Guy
That's not me!

CHORUS
Doot-doot-doot-doo!
LORD TETHERBY
Hey!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Hahahahaha...
Guest chapter 6 . 4/7
I know it's a throwback, but I'm late to the party. Is Master Necromos the kind of guy you want to keep one firm hand on your soul when you talk to him? That is to say, is a double cross less of an "if" and more of a "when?" We know Lucy doesn't trust him, and I know I don't trust him, but is Necromos an outright villain on the horizon?
Guest chapter 8 . 4/6
Sorry, as of last chapter, I forgot to change it from Doctor Cobra to Ringhals, and then I thought it failed to post. Turns out it was delayed by a few days.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/5
I hope you are doing okay. If you're busy, we understand, but with everything going on, I figured I'd ask to make sure, just in case.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/4
Character ideas for high-ranking members, elite assassins, and/or superhuman operatives, depending on where you think they should go best. Please feel free to pick and choose from the list; there are too many here for them all to be used.

Anaconda, a giant-sized supervillain named after the biggest living snake.

Arrowhead, a caped archer that uses trick arrows that resemble snakes, especially poison arrows.

Blood Python, a large Parasite-style villain that feeds on lifeforces and superpowers.

Boa Constrictor, a female Amazon-like villain with a form of tactile telekinesis that enables her to place her hands on a surface and then mentally compress the object that a surface is part of, crumpling it like aluminum with her hands in the center like a very low-level black hole. She can use this to rip holes in walls, flatten vehicles and those inside, turn weapons into useless hunks of metal, and even break arms and legs by having the limb twist and turn in on itself. She also wears what can be only described as a feather boa that looks and feels like a snake.

Doctor Cobra, a top scientist with acid-spraying/acid bullet pistols, since cobras are considered the smartest snakes.

Emerald Boa, a green-dressed higher-up with impossible strength and reflexes, capable of feats such as hanging by fingers or toes, scaling sheer surfaces, and grabbing even a bullet in midair.

Hoopsnake, a grinning psychopathic womanchild and young adult female supervillain that skips and fights with expanding hula-hoops as weapons that she uses in many ways, including as regular hula-hoops. She wears hoop earrings and her hair is even styled into hoops.

Jumpstrike, parkour expert after the jumping viper.

Kapuas, named after the Kapuas mudsnake, which is able to change its colors like a chameleon.
A: A shapeshifter that "sheds" previous forms in a mudlike substance;
B: An invisible villain; or
C: A camouflage expert that turns into the color of their background, instead of outright invisibility.

Mamba, a superspeedster based on the fastest snake: the black mamba.*

Mangrove, a musclebound, mid-level plant controller (less than Poison Ivy or Swamp Thing).

Moccasin, a completely silent mime-like super-agent that's almost always smiling, but the mouth never opens.*

Ornata, a flamboyant villain/villainess with jewel-like scales, clothes, and winged arms, after the ornate flying snake.

Rattlesnake, with molecular vibration powers to phase through or destroy objects, torture people, and send enemies flying. Whenever they vibrate, a droning, rattling sound is heard, and the people they fight are definitely "rattled."*

Reticula, able to shoot energy nets to trap enemies and is able to make them so that not even air or energy can pass through them.

Scytale, a cybernetic coder, hacker, and programmer supervillain, with the name inspired by the scytale serpent in medieval folklore, the anilius snake on which it was based, and the scytale cipher tool used by Greek soldiers to make coded messages.

Sea Krait, an aquatic swimming super-agent with a suit backpack like Pyro from the X-Men's rogues gallery, but it shoots water to control instead of fire.

Shieldtail, with a long, prehensile tail that ends in a shield shape just like the actual snake. Shieldtail's entire body is covered in durable scaly chain-mail, and the tail is so strong that Shieldtail coils it into a circle with the shield-shaped tail-end in the center, turning the entire tail into a shield that withstands firepower and most attacks. Shieldtail also uses the shield-ended tail to smash and attack, like Captain America does, only the shield-ended tail can't be thrown so it's more like a cross between Captain America and Scorpion.*

Tigersnake, a hair-trigger temper villain with lots of rage-berserker modes, rage-fueled powers, fiery aura, and maybe claws.*

*The name was suggested by Nick Name, and I came up with the rest of the character.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/24
I am loving this it’s written well and reminds me of the Loud heroes
Lord demon chapter 8 . 2/24
Here's an idea for a chapter, called Ice and Arachnids
It involves with the loud family spending their vacation in San Francisco but their vacation is interrupted by a war going on the street between the Hel-Walkers, San Francisco hero The Blue Arachnid, and the police department. The Hel-Walkers are a militia of ice powered soldiers, they wear metal and rubber armor with gas mask helmets, and two canisters on their back, one containing oxygen the other contains liquid nitrogen, they use their cryokinesis abilities to expand their territories and for combat, they refused to tell how they got their powers, they are divided to different variants standards use less of their powers and instead use pistole, machine guns and shotguns, ellite use their power frequently from ice swords, cyro whips and ice sheilds, heavy also use their powers along being armed with gautling guns ,crushers heavily use their powers from ice towers, ice beam and ice rockets, and finally titans are covered by large mass of ice giving them appearance of a 12 foot giant, they use ice beams, ice rockets and ice slam.
The Blue Arachnid is San Francisco hero ( he is a mix between Spiderman and blue beetle) his real name is Shinya Kamiya, he is Japanese American around Luna age, he wears a orange shirt with grey pants and light blue shoes, lives with his mom and pet dalmatian pup digger, his Mom Mrs Kamiya work in the hospital almost never home, his pet dalmatian pup digger is small with black and white fur with his paw covered in dirt he got the name digger because he has a habit of digging. Shibya suit is alive with a small metal blue arachnid infused to his back, when activated the arachnid tranforms into a suit covering Shinya body, the suit is colored black and blue, metallic in appearance, with his mask having insect eyes like visors, with a arachnid symbol on the front and back, the blue arachnid machine increases in size when the suit activates, surprisingly the suit comes with wings, along with the suit, the suit also summons blasters, claws, stinger tails and web shooters, also digger is the only one who knows shinya is The Blue Arachnid thanks to his high sense of smell. He teams up with the louds to help him to fight the Hel-Walkers
Omni Spectator chapter 8 . 2/24
I know who Brainwave is already.
The clues all point to one man, but I won’t spoil it...
STLBluesFan67 chapter 8 . 2/24
Is this crossover arc with Inspector Gadget already set in stone for you? Because if not, I wonder if it’s possible for you to include Talon (Dr. Claw’s young nephew from the Netflix series) into it.
Owldusk chapter 8 . 2/24
To be honest, excellent as always- though I really need to ask...

why put inspector gadget in here? wouldn't you have done it better if you made one-shot crossovers with this fic?
Guest chapter 7 . 1/31
Eophis, secret immortal leader of the Den of Vipers from the far-flung past. His or her name means "dawn snake." Inspired by Lisa's recent facing of Pop-Pop's mortality and research to increase lifespans.
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