Poor training dummy lol

How can my mens out here puting so much effort into this is, unbelievable. While Im over here just publish something both cursed and an blessing and Im over here stretching it like many seasons that are in the simpsons.

10/10 congrats

This is good story .but I have idea hear me out hear I was looking at all the other story’s u made one of your planned ideas caught my attention Doom. I think (for shits and giggles) you do put the doomSlayer in Temporary And the doom demons.

Just spent the last couple of days reading this from the beginning till where you left off... and I must say, I quite enjoy what you have going on. I like how your story is a more realistic take on the harem style genre of stories, but it still maintains good plot and quality action scenes.

Love the story, keep it up. Im excited to see where you take it.

love it

Well, the battle between Uris finally now over and Jute as the next Zargos, though I wonder if he’ll actually be successful at his mission? Spyra seems to be opening up to the Fallen again and their relationship looks to be starting to heal, although it may take a while. In the last chapter, we saw Ignitia lose control that lead to a fight between her and Spyra, and I’m not sure how I felt about that, like it felt weird and odd to me?

The part with Taliopia and Morinth was good and a little refreshing, I was wondering what the Fallen and those two talked about other than that question about if the Fallen likes to kill his enemies. What interested me the most was the sentence of how Taliopia said no to the threesome with the Fallen at first, like, I could see her telling Spyra that to try to say sorry to her but it may not help at all. I hope Tailopia and Morinth don’t get in too much trouble if they get caught!

Overall Chapter 32 and 33 were nice, with 33 being my favorite out of the two.

I give this chapter a fine golf clap because of how fantastic this chapter I may be a sucked for the good shiz but this shiz was amazing again this needs to be a game 10/10

Neat chapters

That was an intense chapter. Ten out of ten.

Chapter full of butchery and bravery.

I expect nothing less from Fallen and Spyra, though she must hate having a broken jaw, the worst injury you can give a chatterbox.

Sounds like my weekend at work lol

And another chapter, out of the blue, and going on 2 in the Morning for me. Awesome.

This was great, full of thrills, lots of kills, a few chills . . . and some feels.

Loved the moment with the Fallen, Spyra, and those words. Yeah, we all know how wonderful, but haunting those words can be.

I look forward to seeing what Terradora does, reacting to the Fallen, and also Ignitia seeming to have a crush on him. Knowing him, he'll let her touch him to try and off him, and we all KNOW what will happen from there.
Laugh ahoy!
Or, as the Fallen would say "A** ahoy." I'll see myself out. LOL

Great chapter, loved every second of it! Thanks for it after a rough couple of days, mate! Needed something to perk up.

love it

Cool chapter can't wait for the next.

This was worth the wait. Was afraid you'd discontinued it.

I loved the little meta nod with Spyra's quip about Ignitia acting like a cast member of a kids game. That was a good one.

I loved it, and the exchanges with the Fallen and Ignitia was fun and funny. Loved them working as a team to smash the siege engines.

And the Dragoness Fight was unexpected, but made me laugh, and I needed a laugh with the stuff that's been going on of late. Spyra has certainly come far if she can hold her own against Ignitia like that. Heck, when it's all said and done, I could see her praise Spyra for it. If she can hold her own against one of the Guardians, then they have a better chance yet.

I feel sorry for Volteera, not just in her being prisoner, but her deep regret, hidden behind a cheerful mask. I admit, that one hurt on a very deep level, and makes me want to see the Fallen smash the gates in and get her and the rest out. Sure, he may be more than a bit of a jerk, but I think he may be what Volteera needs to reaffirm herself in life.
I have to give you kudos in not making it all black and white, and Cynder is tragic and sympathetic to a great degree, and I feel compassion and anguish for her, as I do now for Volteera.

The way you craft characters and make them believable is striking.

In a way, I hope Cynder can be free and able to heal, and find her own path in the Cosmos.
I could see her become a Portal Jumper herself, and I could easily see her do a 180 from who she is, and fight tooth and nail and claw against those like Malefora on other worlds. I could easily see her decimate those who would turn children into soldiers like was done to her.
"So none shall have to shed the tears I did . . ." A dark antiheroine with a hidden heart.

So glad to see a wonderful update to this fantastic story.