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Omega Heart Chan chapter 10 . 1/11
Hyper!Nep-chan was so close to meet Super!Purple Heart-chan. She gave some sort similar Nep-note at Hyper!Nep-chan to able catch some bugs.
Also, poor Super!Nep-chan looked sad then ran away and put the gift to Super!Nowa-chan. I'm sure Super!Nowa-chan can apologize her in the future chapter.
Yay! Hyper!Nep-chan's body is almost moving. Nowa-chan looked happy at her, She decided to choose Famitsu's news report about relationship between Super!NepNowa and it got turned off as fast due how shy Hyper!Nowa-chan is xD
For now Super!Compa-chan and Hyper!Nowa-chan went at Super!Planeptune to buy some foods, then suddenly the Nep fanclub are admiring at Nowa-chan and they gave some free pudding. I love those fanclub because they're awesome and fun!
Super!Nepgear-chan brought young Falcom-chan at Compa's house to see Hyper!Nep-chan for help.
They're talking about Ultradimension for what Super!Iffy-chan wanted to know about another versionb of her. However, Super!Iffy-chan was curious about her Mini self from Ultradimension and Hyper!Nep-chan did not want to say, that'll scary her. Hyper!Nep-chan's shares are gaining almost fast as ever, it's all thanks to Nep Fanclub!
Oh my, Super!Nepgear-chan is becoming siscon xD
And in the end chapter Hyper!Nowa-chan has finally returned back to Compa's house to see Hyper!Nep-chan...Dawwwww she kissed Hyper!Nep-chan's right cheek and said good night was pure sweet.
See you in the next chapter Pines-chan. 'waves'
I would love to see what happen to Iffy-chan and Big Nep-chan. 'winks'
Omega Heart Chan chapter 9 . 1/11
Wowsie! It's getting so good.
Super!Compa-chan is telling about Superdimension to Hyper!Nep-chan and Hyper!Nowa-chan was getting so good.
Yes, Superdimension have Floating Island, but they cannot be explored the rest landmasses because that land are filled of full clouds and it's super foggy. I don't want to know and see the way through at the bottom, it's really full of clouds without land because it's super dangerous!
Nep-chan tried to explain about dimensional exploration, that she had been explored to Ultradimension, Megatagmension, Hyperdevotion, Idoldimension and SuperdimensionV2 'That dimension is VS Sega Hard girl'
Dawwww Nowa-chan's nose is bleeding while imagining Purple Heart-chan's body are filled of bandages with a sexy body. 'giggles'
This why i really love between Nep-chan and Nowa-chan because they make great couples.
In Hyperdimension.
Uni-chan is almost thinking some naughty stuffs about Nepgear-chan. Oh my, how lewd xD
So they're at Histy-chan's dimensional room communication to talk the Ultradimension Mini Histy-chan, then Uzume-chan came to tal her and became excited to see Mini Histy-chan.
Those poor worker must've worked really hard to bring or repair Plutia-chan's bed, She didn't get enough to sleep...so scary.
Somehow, Hyper!Iffy-chan almost broke 4th wall like Super!Iffy-chan xD
Big Nep-chan said "back when Seven Sages was still at large" Uh, oh! Here comes the plot twist!
Omega Heart Chan chapter 8 . 1/11
Hyper!Nep-chan and Hyper!Nowa-chan are sleeping together then they woke up, that was wonderful day between two.
Also, Nowa-chan's face has gone redder then goes very tsun tsun when comes toward to Nep-chan xD
Speaking of devil...eggplants are evil! Yes, Hyper!Nep-chan hates it because they taste very bad and allergic to her. Saturn likes Eggplant ?! That's very strange to her for tasting an eggplant, no wonder why Hyper!Nep-chan past is getting interesting about Saturn.
I think young Falcom-chan is secretly Nepnowa fan 'giggles'
Oh, Super!Nep-chan is jealous and pouting at someone who tries to get close to Super!Nowa-chan ?!
Aehm, I have words to say Super!Nowa-chan belongs to Super!Nep-chan.
And Hyper!Nep-chan and Hyper!Nowa are madly blushing for hearing at young Falcom's talk that made me happy.
For now there's Super!Nepgear-chan is gonna help Hyper!Nep-chan and Hyper!Nowa-chan to return their own dimension. Honestly, I liked Superdimension Neptunia Re;Birth 1 because they had more yuri stuffs!
That's right, Hyper!Nep-chan. Hyper!Nowa-chan can be more pretty with hair down and you should confess her 'giggles'
Omega Heart Chan chapter 7 . 1/11
Awwww poor Nowa-chan is crying over at Nep-chan and Nep-chan is okay, but Nep-chan's body is temporaly paralyzed...phew at least Nep-chan is gonna be fine soon.
Compa-chan, Iffy-chan and Falcom-chan are going out to shopping or somewhere else then left Nowa-chan alone with Nep-chan in care.
Nowa-chan brought one homemade pudding from inside refigerator to feed Nep-chan was the most adorable moments! 'oh...no! I am nosebleeding'
Nep-chan always tease Nowa-chan because it's cute and fun!
T-those 2 sharicite stuffs that are Neo Sharicite and another one is CPU Memory alike. That Neo Sharicite allows you to transform into CPU who has CPU form already in their own dimension and that CPU Memory can be more scary because they have low chance to become full CPU, what if it fails then you'll become into monster...super scary!
On to Hyperdimension!
Uzume-chan is working hard and helping Nepgear-chan and Uni-chan to gain their shares.
'Looks at those Citizens'
Yuppie, Uzubae sounds more cute; UniGear is canon seems accurate 'I wanna say Nepnowa is canon because they're best shipping!' and that part "Histy lecture me!" was funny, they want to be lectured by her.
Nepgear-chan wants to cuddle Uni-chan while being asleep and smelling her hair on their bed...tehehehe they're cute and Nepgear-chan is sleeptalking xD
Misaka Phenex chapter 9 . 12/4/2019
wahahaha its back o want ore
Misaka Phenex chapter 8 . 11/11/2019
yes she is always this pretty that i want MORE
Guest chapter 7 . 11/2/2019
That part at the end about someone having a wet dream in front of the person in the dream is hilarious and I'm honestly surprised no one did something like that before, it's such an easy way to make an unitentional confession.
Omega Heart Chan chapter 6 . 10/12/2019
Nowa-chan wanted to see Nep-chan so cute.
They're at Compa-chan's house in Superdimension, i wonder how would they react the counterpart, that would be huge of full surprises xD
I feel bad for Falcom-chan because she miss her home from her dimension. The Dimensional Eartquake ? That's new, your idea seems nice. Oh, you didn't include Marvy-chan because Falcom-Chan is the only best maker ever xD
Oh, No! Nep-chan body is still paralyzed, I hope Nowa-chan can protect her.
See you in the next chapter, Pines-chan. 'waves'
Omega Heart Chan chapter 5 . 10/4/2019
Yay! Your beta reader got selected by Kurogems-chan! Congratulations! 'claps claps'
Gear-chan needs to calm down and Uni-chan too xD
The culprit is gonna be solved soon ?! I can't wait for that, it's getting so exciting 'i am so happy'
Dawwww those beautiful note was written by Nowa-chan. Uni-chan seems happy to her sister.
See you in the next chapter, Pines-chan and thank you, Kurogems-chan for helping her. 'waves'
P.S: That cover is almost funny xD
Omega Heart Chan chapter 4 . 10/4/2019
Yay! They have arrived the Superdimension 'my favorite dimension forever' that pudding scene was my favorite Neptunia game forever, this why i enjoy playing RB1 as many times! 'excited'
Oh, No. Hyper Nowa-chan can't transform and her injuries cannot be healed. I have a bad feeling!
Agree, Hyper Nowa-chan. Hyper Nep-chan is still cute and adorable when she goes sleep.
Also, sleep well Hyper Nowa-chan and Hyper Nep-chan 'so cute'
Skydragon0 chapter 4 . 9/21/2019
Poor Hyper!Noire, witnessing her Super!self kissing Super!Nep AND getting swept off her feet at the same time
Omega Heart Chan chapter 3 . 9/7/2019
Oooh it seems they're transported to MegatagMension.
Megatag!Nowa-chan wanted to do a kiss scene with Megatag!Nep-chan just like what they did to UniGear kissing scene was my favorite part, but Blanny-chan had to cut the scene then i was like "Ahhh come on, Blanny-chan! Please make it more because that part was getting so good and they're too close kissing!"...i wish they made a Nepnowa scene at MegaTagMension game because i would love to enjoy that scene like they did to Unigear's confession.
To the Hyperdevotion Noire, where she gets more friends than the rest dimension and nobody noticed them, Nep-chan/Purple Heart-chan was happy to see another Nowa-chan for getting many friends without getting noticed and finally they went to the Superdimension Re;birth1 'my favorite Neptunia game ever! I would love to review that game to 10/10 score!'
Oh, no! Hyper!Gear-chan has collapsed due her shares are on low, so Histy-chan called the groups to investigate the culprit, but i wonder Croire-chan is lurking somewhere without getting along Big Nep-chan!...wait a sec !? A red dark electricity ? I wonder the effect was the cause by Nep-chan's new ability is Dimensional breaker VII that ability was a bit dangerous, but we'll find out.
At the end of line, Nowa-chan is finally awake and carrying Hyper!Nep-chan to find a safe spot. I hope Hyper!Nep-chan doesn't get Amnesia.
Btw, you're close at 3k words, so you can get a beta reader or proofreader might help you to improve the writing! Way to go, Pines-chan!
See you in the next chapter, Pines-chan! 'winks'
Omega Heart Chan chapter 2 . 9/7/2019
Poor Plutia-chan's bed turned into a mess and they found Nep-chan and Nowa-chan are lying on her bed then gets transported to SuperSehaDimension.
Yay, it's Segami-chan! She wants to confess Iffy-chan from her dimension, but they were to close confess because Nepbike-chan is whistling xD
Best part when Segami-chan called "Shut up crapbike!" to Nepbike-chan that was bit mean, but funny xD
And Nepbike-chan said "wowie! Go Me!" to her counterpart for saving Nowa-chan was my favorite part too...and they get transported again. This part was getting so good!
Omega Heart Chan chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
I love this idea of your story.
Also, don't give up and i hope you'll find a good beta reader.
Good luck, Pines4Ever-chan. 'winks'
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
This seems interesting. Writing something for the first time can be scary and difficult, try to find someone that can help you beta read and give advice in general. Don't give up and keep going!
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