Please tell me you're planning to make a chapter two! It looks interesting!

hiruma why ur angry?

nice story

I know what you meant about cringing. It's been years since I've written anything for this website, and when I finally come back to this particular fandom, well there are about a thousand or so more fanfics. But I digress, I re-read my own work and I'm so embarrassed. I was never a stickler for grammar, but that-that made me twitch.

Enough about me, more so about this fic. I love it. It's cute and reminds of the Lucky Star, 'yaoi-nani,' comment. I hope you'll find what you need to start writing again.

And I hope you and others add to what is still today my favorite manga and fandom.