Awesomeness please continue

J'aime beaucoup .

J'aime beaucoup tes notes et tes réponses.
Par contre pourquoi mj doit être une héroïne?
Car sakura a des pouvoirs mais est inutile .
Pour le harem je pense que c'est bien pas trop de monde car pour cela il faut prendre beaucoup de temps.

La vie normal de Naruto peut se faire une fois qu'il aura prix .ce

J'aime bien même si ben est mort il fait partie du changement pour parker et ici meme naruto changera.

J'adore les feedback des auteurs sur les commentaires cela est génial à mon sens.
J'aime qu'on apprenne un peu plus sur le monde d'origine de naruto un peu à la arrow.
Il peut-être avec qu'il veut mais il faut que cela soit bien ecrit.
Mj rousse belle il y a trulli qui est pas mal.
Pour les filles qui sont ou devrait ou vont devenir en couple il faut que l'écriture soit magique pour que naruto soit la.
Péter est-il spiderman ?

Pour le harem 2 blondes 2 rousses .
J'adore les harems, les citrons et tout cela.
Mais quand c'est bien écrit que cela suit une bonne logique je suis fan car souvent c'est un peu précipité ou trop long.

J'aime bien ton naruto il a été entraîné soit par root ou par le duo jiraya kakashi.
D'ailleurs comment a toi obtenu son épée ?

This has been a good read.

I am curious why are you doing a harem though neither Naruto nor Marvel are harem based. As such you run the risk of it being a very weird and awkward read. Marvel is very close to out World in type of things as such it is hard to imagine the women in said harem actually being in one. I mean you could do a polyamorous type relationship between them. Least that way Naruto won't be the center of the relationship/harem.

due to his lack of action ben died.

good god man can you be any more dramatic, a child on the other side of the world just died of hunger while you are eating your burger. you murderer.
the neighbor died in a car eccident all because you let him ride it. you monster

you over explain everything.
there where rumours about naruto so you explained why and what then later when it is mentioned you go over it all again.

it is boring and repetitive. honestly so far naruto is more of hang on character to marvel

im having a hard time believing grimm could fight naruto with any effect. he is far to slow his strenght far to low only his endurance is high enough to hold up for a while, which would make for a real boring fight. on top of that grimm does not know martial arts, he was an engineer then a became a rock monster whose only sparring partner could be the hulk

saying there are child soldiers because of the biju is not really true now is it. kakashi was genin at 5-6 with no biju.

they have child soldiers because even a child shinobi can be really powerful. and there is alwase war because there is no nuclear deterent.

I was hoping the harem wouldn't hold the story back but it couldn't have been more clear at their first meeting it was going to be an issue. Naruto's a d*uche, Susan's boring and I can forsee this becoming a simple story of gathering and keeping girls. Bleh!

I wish you could use double entendre, subtext as a way to DISGUISE secrets. Because secrets is plot and EARNED.

Wow. Now he understands and YOU writer do understand the MAIN problem of most comic heroes. They are not heroes anymore they are monsters. Joker, Lex any other pyschos that only kill for fun, amusement and only to be in prison still alive. Naive, thus the cycle continues of innocents dying because they could not kill.

Who is more of a monster One who KILLS monsters or one who PROTECTS monters.

It does not matter, preaching to better because as long as the men who just want to watch the world burn are still alive, bodies WILL continue to pile up. That is not heroism anymore.

Eh I like Ororo but I don’t think she would go well with naruto