Reviews for New Body, New Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() really loving the premise and direction, please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting stuff looking forward to more |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Don't leave it on such a huge cliffhanger I'm dying here, my adrenaline is pumping through my veins right now and I need another chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just stumbled across this and it’s great so far with how you spent so much time setting up the backstory before things really begin. I’m really looking forward to how he affects the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He read all the book store book in 2 months? that seem unrealistic. |
![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does Dumbledore still is headmaster? Is he alive? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter I like how fast he is progressing. Will matt eventually stumble upon how to enter minds and read and manipulate them? He has his mind thoroughly guarded and organised so it would make sense he would find out to mentally go on the offensive and have him self learn Legilimency. I've been wondering why Matt is eight-years-old in this, Harry would be sixteen since it's 1996 so I thought you would have had Matt and Harry start Hogwarts together and have him replace that idiot Ron Weasley. Any reason to why Matt is so young, so far ahead into the story? Anyway good chapter and story, have Matt learn how to Legilimens people and have fun with it, maybe age him up some and start taking an interest in girls and self learn some offensive magic and transfiguration/conjuration. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter needs re-wrote, looks like it has a virus or something. |