Great story, but you definitely could have deviated more from the original timeline for having such a new strong character in the mix. Murtagh was interesting but I felt like he should have felt an infatuation for Anurin but for Anurin never to reciprocate due to her dragons dislike for Murtagh. But this was really well written. Although I disliked he original ending I think some unhappiness sprinkled into a happy ending is needed for a complete ending. Loved the story hopefully you have another interesting one to tell about this world of alagaesia!

WOOOOOOOW.
:O

Thanks for sharing this great story.

''...I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way
than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.''
( Pablo Neruda)

Yay! She has found him. :D

Anurin, listen to your heart. After all, there is nothing but love in there.

A magnificent chapter!

That is a new turn of the story. I want to see what happens next. For a brief moment I was afraid that Galbatorix would try to conquer Murtagh's body (same way when he made him kill Oromis) and use him to seduce Anurin.

This chapter was sad... :(

What a clever idea! Anurin is a very brave young woman.

So, he cares!

Little red viper?

I love Anurin for her wise statements to Elva. She is so right. :D
The werecats are cute.

I hope Oromis is safe.

Oh my, Murtagh is very angry. :(