hey! finally got a chance to check out your stories, i love how you include the normal titans stuff ie fighting aha, i find that super hard to do
keep writing!
lovingly, bree

lol raven smirking at her soon to be husband beastboy lose your clothes now

This was good, ive honestly daydreamed about both "evil" sides coming out and fighting in honor of the other
Real good fic excellent job:)

May want to find yourself a Beta reader. The story is lovely and the concept is fun, but I had to re-read some sentences in order to figure out what was going on. Still nice though and I’ll see if I can find that story that inspired this as you have peaked my interest.

I think you might want to take this back for editing and grammar checks, I’m sorry to say that this Fic is, simply put, impossibly hard to read, almost insufferably so. But it has potential if you do fix these errors in writing style