The scene where Jae is declared the King from the West is a nice touch. It reminds me of Robb being declared the King in the North. That still was quite the time skip. It leaves us concerned for the fate of Myrcella and Joffrey. The demand to hand over Tommen for execution hints at the reason Robert is being called a monster here.

Ned already has declared for his nephew, but he will definitely despise Robert for such acts of cruelty. I imagine even Stannis would not approve, but I don't see him breaking with Robert over this. Stannis could still be a powerful ally in the future, so I hope there are some interesting plans for him.

Mace will definitely feel like a fool once he learns the truth. I can only imagine his reaction when he also learns Jae and Margaery are married. This will be pretty amusing.

damnn war is finally here, you have bee teasing it for like 8 chapters, but can wait for the battles, i guess that you will explain the situation on kings landing i mean if jon arryn doesnt die hoew did robert find out about his bastards princes

Dahmm what a good story.
I haven't reviewed before, but from chapter one, i was hinged on this story. All 106 chapters were read in 3 weeks haha. I hope you see it through till the end. To many good stories were stopped half way:(

Kinda feel sorry for robert, gonna be taking down by neds boy...

That was an interesting ending. I wonder whose heads are on those spikes. Given the naming of Tommen as a bastard I assume it's Cersei and Joffrey, I hope Myrcella isn't among them. Robert truly would kill the two of them. I wonder, though, if the treason that Tommen allegedly committed is to back Jae. Is his identity known far and wide? It's going to be a long wait to get the three months.
So Rhaenix found Valyrian Steel and now Jae needs to go back to collect some treasures for the real war. Wonder if he'll pick up any books on dragons or making Valyrian steel or Valyrian roads, which I rarely see in a fanfic. Seems like he'd be smart enough to get more than just weapons. I really liked Jae seeing his family and Rhaenys seeing them as her human self.
The meeting with the loyalists was good, but they have a ways to go to meet the mind power of that women's council. Definitely something Margaery should continue when she's Queen.
Will Jae be going to Winterfell for the wedding as well? I assume Sansa is going to travel with Robb and the Manderlys. I wonder who of the Tyrell camp will escort her or if she'll be in Winterfell for a while. If war is going to break out soon, traveling won't be easy. I guess she could take a ship down the west coast to Casterly Rock as well. Robb is not going to take the news she has to share well. Hope Bran and Brynden find out as well. That'll really sink Cat with the pack.
I wonder what Jae is going to do about Doran or if he dealt with him in the three month time jump. Really looking forward to finding out what happened during this missing time. Keep up the great work!

Really like it as always and gotten even better with the war prep. Can you hint at what will happen to jofferey once Jon/Jae is king?

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Doran better die but damn loved the time jump

Oooooooooóoo, pero que capítulo, todo el desarrollo, planeación, alianzas, traiciones, todo para llegar a este punto el inicio de uno y el fin de otro.
El final de este fue para mi lo mejor, las palabras escritas llegaron adonde debía llegar, al corazón sentí esa emoción que hay antes de que todo se vaya al caos, ye agradezco por traer esta increíble historia, todo tu esfuerzo ,y tiempo invertido, GRACIAS. Se que la historia no termina todavía pero sentí la necesidad de escribirte eso, te mando un saludo y te Leo en el próximo.

I am hyped for the War. Are you planning on letting Robb play a bigger Role in the War? I think it would be cool because he proved to be a good General in the Books and Series.

Robert will be needing a Queen. Will he go for Margy ? Or someone from a less ambitious House ? I do hope you plan to show more of the interval ? This is a bit to big a skip.?

Oh my god! In the first half I was tempted to joke about the Irony of Robert only making good decisions when it comes to Jon. With that ending, though, wow! So I take it that Cersei, Joffrey, and Myrcella are all dead, now. Its shocking that Robert would straight up murder Tommen and the other children for something they had no control over. Like... exile, sure. But this? Though it makes great sense, storywise. Cersei and Joffrey are gone, Tommen won't feel wholly betrayed by the Jon, the war starts, and it brings a great parallel to how the last war started with Jon Arryn.

I've always assumed Loras would be Kingsguard, I sure hope he's one of the 5. Please don't EVER skip a day on this story!

Please not Myrcella ? And aside from being born what did Tommen do.?

Cant wait to see what will happen next!

Now that was just a dirty trick. A three month jump with no explanation on what brings us to that point. Talk about a teaser ending. This chapter was an awesome read, I really enjoy the interactions between Tommen and Jon. I look forward to seeing how the end of this chapter came about.

Cel