Breath-taking. Chesire as a human, IN LOVE with Alice, it's just perfect. And the dialogue, oh my. I can't. Thank you for this absolute delight of a chapter.

OI! please update! PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE! you can't just leave it like that! I need MORE! I NEED it! I beg you! update! don't abandon such a promising story! way to many people have stopped writing stories that they have started, leaving forlorn readers such as myself, very very very very sad! its very good! SUPER interesting! I love this story please continue!

Hello, yes, i'm another desperate reader to read this un-complete fan fiction of yours... Like others, i found this one very tempting to read. And i can't stop reading it. Its very detailed and full of fantasy tht i would never thought of! Its amazing and very hope to you tht to continue this so we all won't keep questioning what would happen next, between Cheshire and Alice.

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Looking forward for another fan fiction from you too since you're very good in making this one. ;)

This story is brilliant, and wonderfully written besides. I can't wait to see what happens to Alice next, and what the Alice meant about Eleven coming. Please update soon!

love it!

Oh please update! I adore how you made the asylum feel like a level in the game :) Also, you capture these two perfectly, in dialogue, thought, and overall spirit- I hope to live to see an update.

Oh god no. Really? It's been years since you've updated? I am so, entirely sad now... is there really no hope? This is the most fantastic thing ever... it can't just be left like this, half-formed and on the dust... it's... it's downright disrespectful!

Oh, please, please, PLEASE update this story! It's so hard to find amazing CheshireAlice AMA fanfictions, and this one is certainly one of the best. Please continue! Don't give up!

Still holding out hope for an update.

I'm absolutley fascinated with this story. I love your attention to detail and use of imagery. I hope Cheshire and Alice do get together, they sre such a lovely pair. ) Anyways, I hope you update soon.

ohh! i love this! :) please continue! i wish more poeple would write about alice and cheshire. such a cute couple! :)

I love this! This story is so amazing. I see you haven't updated for a few years. I hope you will. This really is too good to leave unfinished.

please update soon.

I desperately hope this story isn't discontinued. It's very well written and has a perfect mood setting. Not to mention I adore the way you portray Cheshire.

oh how the Cheshire can be thrown out of his place of mind just by being in reality. Wonderland is a place without the rules, logic, or even laws. Your story here is quite the thing, however, I feel as though you went too easy on Cheshire Cat. He had yet to really find and feel the pain and suffering that Alice went through in that prison. But as Cheshire said himself: "You may have missed something - what's rubbish to one is salvation to another", Cheshire should not have given up the deed to the asylum so easily I think...

I realize its been a few years since you've updated and you probably never will, but I just felt to compliment the mentality of your story. It was very appealing, and you hold great talent for writing. Thank you for writing what you did.