I think it will the sex screens wait for Naruto to be 16 or 17 years old and Naruto have menma powers and outfit

Great story please uptdate soon

You got me interested, though a few parts need work such like the sentences of a few parts within the story such as, "How could you be alive and this is why everyone hates me?" If you read out loud it sounds weird to say or read. Nevertheless keep up the good work this is an interesting story

great chapter and as for the older stories I look forward to seeing Team Outcast and Finally Found Love get completed over time

Awesome third chapter man can't wait to read more so please keep up the awesomeness and keep me posted when you update again thanks.

This was a great chapter I really enjoyed reading it. you did an excellent job.

thank you for update

interesting, I like it.

Okay, I must say that I liked this chapter a lot and it was full of very important information. Naruto finally had his 'First Mission' with his Gennin Team, unfortunately ended up being in a rather strange situation:

1. It is noted that Murasaki does not like very much that Naruto and Sakura are so Close and Confident with each other ... I hope to see how the relationship between these 3 develops.

2. Naruto met Ingrid (Edwin Black's Hell Knight) who apparently went to 'Violate', pitifully when Naruto went to cover her with his jacket, he smiled at him ... Something very strange.

3. Naruto ended up being face to face with Edwin Black himself, since he wants to put it to the test so that Naruto 'Awakens His Blood' or 'His True Me' ... Is Naruto perhaps a descendant of Black?

4. Asagi and Sakura worried a lot about seeing Naruto near Edwin Black, and they even show that they are both very fond of Naruto.

I will wait very anxiously then, Luck and Ja-Ne.

PS: Hopefully you can give a little more Orientation to the coming Chapters, since in this Chapter I change the Scenes and Events that happened during the mission in a very abrupt way.

- Naruto carrying mission.
- Naruto attacking bandits saving Ingrid.
- Meet Black and fight with those 'Two Statues'.
- Asagi and Sakura arrive in such an abrupt way on that mission without any explanation.
- And then they were in Konoha again when Naruto talked to Asagi and Sakura about their encounter with Black.

Interesting story and I like it! *Thumbs UP!* Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!

Well this fic is intresting i like it but... i hope you dont do the hole thing like the anime and mangas dude becuse i will beat you to a bloody pulp my self with a bath i never like the anime nor the manga... though i did like when there breast were a lot bigger in them so try to have the girls get couth on a drug to make them huge then yes but no dont do the hole anime thing .ntr really is something hate the most in life pal

have to say for the second chap its not bad looking forward to see what u do in the 3rd chap.

I can't wait for the next chapter so keep up with the amazing work and can u please make another Naruto lemon story about him going out with kurenai and anko.

for the first chap not bad its different. have to check out the next one to see where this story is going. and also glad to see u back writing again

Poor naruto with taimanin he is bound to get ntr’ed