Lots of wrong grammer, but overall it was ok.

This was great until the fucking clones ruined it. Clones aren't true copies and most men would not enjoy watching other guys no matter whether they look like themself or not thrusting into their girl(s).

Most readers dont like gangbangs either.

Fucking pissed.

pls write more of this!

Wish there were more like this.

Hot and amazing!

Thank you.
Less stuttering would make it better.
And the first paragraph could do with some spacing.
Please keep up the good work.

I understand that it was for the purpose of the story, but how the heck is Clara the only child at this point?! They would probably have a child every year with how much sex Athena and Naruto, and fertility doesn’t seem to be a problem since Athena seemingly got pregnant the first time they had sex. Shouldn’t they have a lot of children at this point?
Otherwise, I enjoyed the story for what it is.

Awesome

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Love it

Good chapter and I am glad you made it so it was only in the naruto world as that manga did get weird

I enjoy it more than I thought.

Very good chapter.
A great story
If you wanted to make a continuation, some possible daughters would be: galatea, (karen) supergirl, (kara) powergirl, (carol) captain marvel, etc ,. You know, blue-eyed blondes. ha
Keep it up.
Regards

This was hot. Like how Athena and Clara were portrayed. Looking forward to reading more

Good smut