Fuck. That ‘faked kindness would be better than nothing’ hit me right in the feelz.

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Interesting so far.
One... funny note? Danny mentions it's a school night, but aren't they all suspended?

I have to vote for the Miss Muffet costume

wow

Nice chapter! :D Enjoyed the costume designs!

Not sure about Miss Muffet but it'll probably grow on me. I look forward to your next update :)

Hm, pretty sure a name like "Miss Muffet" would see Taylor getting teased until she earns her rep. No one would laugh when they all know she could cover them in more than just bees. Not sure why "Rumble Bee" came to mind just now, but whatever.

Considering the fact that Taylor can use her bugs to help her aim, she's probably best suited for the ranged support role. Not that I think she's discovered that aspect, yet. I've always kind of wondered why Taylor hasn't tried to use a sniper rifle with her bugs in any fanfiction, but then I remember that there's more to a sniper than just having a steady arm.

Then again, her bugs basically give her all the data she needs in order to line up a proper shot. They could give her wind, range, elevation, and all of the other stuff she needs. So long as they're in her range, anyways.

Charlotte's would be a good name for a cape name.

Oooooh, cliffhanger! :D

That said, enjoyed the chapter!

super!

Enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to the next update :)

*nods firmly* Huzzah for college.
So long, at least, as you're getting something out of it.

Good to see the update, though. _

Woooo, trusting family! :D