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So good story!

My inner Otaku is annoyed by Shirou ignoring the legendary bow! But I love him.

Rin's commentary and dialogue is the best and totally something she'd say, "What is this?" "A sword?" *THWAK* "No, it's an arrow." Hahahaha! Funniest line: "What's a Skill?" I fucking died reading that. Also, this should totally be continued. Shirou should totally trash the other heroes and the king for what happened with Naofumi. Lastly, I want more TohsakaxShirou. So again, this should be continued. I'm going to go re-read your Carnival Phantasm and RWBY parody again.

Grail-kun, Grail-kun! GradationAir said he won't continue this story! ... huh? If I become a hero I can force him to continue? But I don't think I can become one... You know a shortcut? *SHINK* T-that is one shiny knife... You mean I have to...? Well, if it makes me a hero, I'll do it.

so good

it's cool update soon

Great chapter m8

please update

Shirou is both the least prepared and the most overpowered player available at this time.

Oh I like this! lol, I see much potential lol. Hmm, are any other members of Shirou's circle gonna show up? Saber? Rider? Sakura? Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

This was a fun read and you did a good job with it. I only wish you said this was a one shot at the top instead of at the bottom. I don't like to read one shot stories because of how they make me feel after I'm done. Unfulfilled potential. Wanting more where there will be none. Oh well. Like I said it was enjoyable still. You did good

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Omg i love this

I liked it, to bad a one shot but great none the less