Woahh que candente.

Always thought this was one of your best stories. Not a huge fan of the Bee inclusion, but the first two chapters are great! I did notice you mention a lot that you dislike how this story ended up, I would love to know why you feel this way?

You need mental help this is racist fetish garbage

An interesting story awaits the next episode and please put a Naruino story with some chapters after Naruto defeats Pain.

Estimad ficker
Tu Fic como buen lemon es explicito, caliente, novedoso por las posiciones que incluye, y considera no dañar físicamente como parte del acto sexual. Ademas esta coherentemernte escrito y deja entrever parte de las personalidades de los personajes (sobre todo de A). Sin embargo, como concepto mas que usar adulterio corresponderia usar violacion, A abusa de su poder tanto fisico como politico para someter a Sakura,que si bien fantasea con el no hubiese terminado teniendo sexo si no la hubiese forzado, por lo cual no tiene su consentimiento cayendo en la categoria de violacion. Creo que es importante considerarlo para no entregar mensajes errados, quizás aclarlo al inicio como nota, para no perder el enfoque de "adulterio" que se le quire dar en el fic.

C:

Great story! Ignore the snowflakes, this site has a lot of people who don't understand that if they don't like a story, they don't have to read it. Keep up the great work Copier, glad you're back!

garbage story . fuck the old ugly grandpa. Sakura would not betray naruto. your .occ. disgusts me