30k words in 7 months. 1 year in story time. In this pace, it will take 4 years till Tony is kidnapped another 6 plus years untill Endgame. Can't wait untill 2030 to read the end of a fanfiction

its against the wish, its influencing him. also this genre is way too hard to complete nicely. a being trapped inside him, wanting to kill him, this makes the mc over occupied with the shadow to do anything else.

focus on physical fitness in later years, okay?

You know the internet has been publicly available since the early 90's, yes?

You referenced the book so much yet you failed to describe what it was or what it was about. Since our MC obviously only finished highschool you literally could have picked any of the engineering subjects from university for the book. But not describing it just makes it seem like you don't have the originality to even come up with something.

thanks for the chapter also, make mc weak at first. this is a primordial force. to contain its power will need lots of control and training like Naruto and kyuubi. also you do know that God as in yehwe( Christian god) is not thaaat strong in marvel right?(maybe dormamu level?) so he can't be top dog. infinity, eternity and the others along with those 'destroyers'(can't remember name) and a looot of others(including the celestials and death) are a lot stronger than him. God is basically an interdimensional property owner who bought earth(I think that's how it goes...).
if your dark entity is that weak... HOW THE HELL IS HE SUPPOSED TO FIX THINGS FROM MULTIPLE FICTIONAL MULTIVERSES!?
Anyway thanks again and update soon.

One you know the future it won't be the future anymore, if that entity said that he'll kill or become a villain it doesn't mean that'll happen it's only just a possibility

So he will plagiarized others, lol, I doubt it's something like what I'm saying but maybe something similar? copy powers? or something eh whatever

"Let go of her Lucy" shouldn't it be him?

Kindergarten- simple letters, how to write ones name and stuff like that, with quite a bit of free time or story time
that's what I remember

I wonder how Fury found out about the MC, hah who am I kidding? he's a spy master

This is pretty nice, I've already said this right? lol

I kinda hope Luke gets together with Rebecca, mhm I had an ex named Rebecca, haha,

There's a couple of mistakes, like adding extra words to sentences and missing letters/words, I don't really remember where but it was between this chapter and the first

I wonder what the shadows were?

that was pretty morbid, the red pool part...
because of that the whole chapter had some jibby scary vibes, it was nice nonetheless, I hope Sarah(?) can get a phycologist help, she'll need it once she realizes what it meant

"This world you see around is marvelous"

just because of this line I'll stay,

this chapter was nice

excellent chapter, i would like to see him Overpowered from the beginning

I vote balls to the walls OP, making MC's weak always irritate me especially since this one has the capacity and potential to be OP. Just Do It.

cool

Is there going to be a time skip in a couple of chapters?