Reviews for The Deku With The Mouth |
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RokuNi chapter 3 . 5/21 really you're such a dick |
theneed4beer chapter 6 . 5/21 you skip around so much its hard to follow |
theneed4beer chapter 2 . 5/21 why is his twin not the same age as his is? |
theneed4beer chapter 1 . 5/21 how did someone that has bin locked up from the age of for know how to fight so well? |
DragoonSensei chapter 20 . 5/20 This will be fun :3 |
bauers374 chapter 8 . 4/23 That infinity War reference though... |
bauers374 chapter 4 . 4/23 Huh, I didn't know It was possible to feel bad for Mineta... |
bauers374 chapter 2 . 4/23 Huh, Eri with OFA... That's unique |
Isamaru chapter 18 . 3/3 it's funny how some of this was inspired by mlp, and then I remember it's the internet. anyway keep up the great work! |
Tim Curry's Toxic Love chapter 18 . 3/3 Why didn't you show Dr. Eaten getting tortured? If would have been cathartic for the reader to see him getting cut open too! |
DragoonSensei chapter 18 . 3/3 Aha "Cupcakes" the single reason why I never ever will be reading Gore fanfictions in the MLP fandom again. There is such thing as TOO Creative. Nice chapter by the way. |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 17 . 2/27 Oh dear |
DragoonSensei chapter 17 . 2/27 Great chapter Do you mean "Cupcake" or "Rainbow Factory" or somethig else? |
darkpaladin89 chapter 17 . 2/27 Uh-oh... *gulp* |
Shane Kor chapter 16 . 2/24 Love the acronym of the anti gaming thing btw |