hey, just read the story, is it possible for you to make an better upload schedule? i really like the story and it would be a shame if it has so slow updates, i mean chapter 16 is already 2 and a half mounths old. 1 or 2 chapters alls 30 days should suffice

This needs an editor. I'm barely able to enjoy the story for what it is in between decoding the meaning of all the confusing sentences. It has a decent amount of favorites and follows so SOMEONE should be willing to go through and edit them for you.

I get wanting to practice a language, but after you've finished your version it wouldn't hurt or slow down your learning to have someone else polish the final version for you.

Continue, pls!

please tsuna x gray

Well, that's a really great fic! I wait the next chapters eagerly.

I'm not too familiar with Type Moon, I mean I saw Fate/Stay Night, Fate Zero, Fate/Stay Unlimited and some good mesure of Tsukihime and Kara no Kyoukai but the last two were years ago. So I'm really far from being real connoiseur.

And so, I'm really appreciative you limited the characters from the Nasuverse to the most basics and famous ones.

PS : It's not too late to kill Gokudera

Fon was not on baby form?

Anyway, though you didn't kill Gokudera – though it's not too late to rectifate it, a mere lackey villain would be enough to kill him – I'm happy you ditched that annoying and useless Haru. That's one thing done.

I didn't expect Fuuta's skills to be related to Root... Interesting development.

Despite my rant last chapter, I knew he would survive. Unfortunately. And for the exact reason I had guessed. Sigh...

I know that Gokudera is a trove in term of character depth and character development and so authors like writing him, but as a character I really, really don't like him.

That aside, it was funny seeing the Bovino's technology being compared with true magic.

Well, at least you made me hope Gokudera would die. I know, it, you will not kill him, it's impossible. I would like it so much, and the last line would clearly make one think you did, but we all know he will survive and it annoys me without end. I know I'm just ranting, over and over, but I really don't like Gokudera. And if only he could die it would be the best thing you can offer me.

Silence him!

Good, now if only Gokudera could leave and never come back, it would be great!

How did the writing quality drop this much? I'm not sure about the earlier chapters, but since I didn't feel discomfort or awkwardness while reading them, I'll suppose they were of good quality. But this chapter, the tense are completely off. It's really unsettling.

Don't misunderstand me. Had it been since the first chapter, I wouldn't have make the remark since I know it isn't easy to write and make good and structured sentences. However since it happened randomly in this chapter, I know you can write well if you concentrate. So I wonder why the quality of this chapter diminushed compared to the previous ones?

Yeah, you got Hayato's personality to a T unfortunaly...

Barely I say I don't want Gokudera showing up that he arrives. Sigh...

Arara, I knew the Mystic Eyes sounded familiars, now at least where the title came from. I really like this cool Tsuna. Plus, Takeshi – who's the one I always shipped with Tsuna – is also very strong and definitely his best friend. It would be great if Gokudera never came but I won't hope too much on that.