I like how some people started overanalyzing fucking porn. lol.

YOU DID IT.

A disgust of history.

great chapter keep it up

Well, i'm glad this is over. I tried finding a chapter that could be great, but sadly it was all the same. Even less developed than a cheap porn plot, which doesn't help if you want to write a decent smut story. You've got to have at least a little bit of sense for that, and it kinda shows that you didn't do your research on the Youkais and especially Koneko.

There has never been any mention in the LN about Kunou and Yasaka's heat periods, or that Yasaka even engaged in that. In fact, the latest light novel states that she is always busy and feels lonely, and she is gonna be in Issei's harem. Kunou... I'm not even sure she is mature enough to go in heat, and that was pedophilia what you did, which could warrant a report here.

About Kuroka, she is a Stray Devil hunted by everybody, no way she would just stay there and ask some random Fallen Angels to do her, especially when she wants much stronger genes that Fallen Angels ones. Also Koneko stated that Nekoshou are mainly after human men, not Fallen Angels ones.

Koneko is not like how you described her at all. The reason she went into heat so soon is because of Issei. Otherwise, she would have been too young for that.
It is not surprising this story is working on AO3 and not here. People tend to like everything on AO3, even when a story is really bad. Show them a girl being done by several guys and they are happy. They wouldn't know what a harem is, or how to have a guy with several girls.

About your rant, you should expect people having different opinions, even though some were quite brutal. However, the moment you post something publicly on the internet, you should expect anything and telling people not to watch if they don't like it is the best way to make them read your stories. Objectively, there is no diversity here, always the same group smut, so not particularly enjoyable for the majority of the people. The grammar is good, but more plot would have been a good thing. Maybe you are not a specialist in that, but be sure that your story would be really improved if you introduced sense and plausibility in it. Otherwises, it is just gonna be another bad fanfic with no real understanding of the DxD universe, which it is here.

It is kind of hilarious to see the people trying to defend the low quality standards of AO3, and the very poor smut quality here, involving a female Youkai character from DxD acting like she would never do in the LN, then a bunch of random useless males comes in, and because they are weak they need to band together to do the girl. No good build up, no respect of the characters, male people nobody care about, and a bad plot even to adult industry standards. There is no variety either, and if the twelve or so people here ( and more betas to come as well as the reviewer right below me ) think this is any good, or if this is truly the best AO3 has to offer, you should stop right here.

You've got good grammar but that's about it. Try doing something more personal, diverse and built up, instead of the old quick gangbang that you would expect from horny teenagers who can't keep their partners for themselves.

Hey I really enjoyed your stories over on AO3, glad to see your moving them over here as well at your own pace. Also try to ignore those people giving negative reviews, they are just jerks using the anonymity of the internet to get away with saying bullshit with out fear of repercussion.

I mean the content of some of your stories almost certainly don’t appeal to everyone, and from what I can tell you may make a few mistakes in regards to how a series goes, but otherwise I feel your smut is very much of nice quality. So please don’t let’s those jerks dishearten you, and keep on bringing your stories over here.

How about you remove this story. You won't get the same support here as you got on AO3, seeing as people here expect more quality. Also, seeing as this is just a bunch of stories where the characters are disrespected and engaged in really bad gangbangs ( do you know how to do a one man and one girl story ? ), it is not like people are missing on anything, especially bad smut stories.

What's with the sudden influx of cucks in this fandom all of a sudden?
Is this a new coping mechanism for the Betas and the cuckolds? I honestly don't get it...

are you the one in the archive right?
Will you upload all your stories here or just some?

Aah, so this is how a cuck copes when dealing with a harem series. They need to make the characters all OOC in order to make them do something they would never do. And with several guys of course, because they don't know how to handle a girl by themselves, so they need other people to do their job.

Well, it is not surprising seeing as it comes from AO3, and the quality there is very very low.

Not half bad.

What's with all these type of stories lately ? I mean, it is starting to get no different than all the bad stories on AO3 and Hentai Foundry. Kuroka settling for Fallen Angels when it has been stated numerous times that she is aiming for Heavenly Dragons ? Or the fact that she should be able to control her heat periods as stated in Volume 11 ?

Another stories for cucks and betas I guess, sigh...