Reviews for The Brother Chase
Guest chapter 10 . 7/7
Sadly spectacular...
Guest chapter 10 . 5/28
So is anyone going to adopt this!?
firelilybloom chapter 10 . 3/22
This is a really great fanfiction... I really hope someone can adopt it.
crimsonbrothers chapter 10 . 3/22
I would love to adopt this from it. if this is a way for you to send me what you have note wises for it for plot and stuff, I would love to take it over and continue it for you.
but if you have no further storyline from where the last chapter ended. I could totally think of something. Do you mind if I change a few things to also make the story my own?
would love to hear from you, cheers.
Asl lover chapter 10 . 3/21
I will respect your decision. I hope someone adops it.
P.S your sister is awesome
JustCallMeCookie chapter 10 . 3/21
So you finally came out and said it sis? Well, that's a-ok! (Tbh I always knew this was coming, but I know and will forever respect how you feel OwO)
VKMP chapter 9 . 3/21
I'm a little sad since I like this story, but your decision is respected. We have no right to be angry anyway especially since you gave warning.

Ironically, the bonus chapter you wrote is exactly what I've been looking for in One Piece fics recently. It's actually shocking how difficult it is to find stories that have both ASL and Shanks as main characters. I see Shanks as Luffy's father figure, and want to see more with him in it.
Trich chapter 9 . 3/19
Anwesome story. Can’t wait to read more!
Guest chapter 9 . 3/15
We can not do much but respect your decision, can we? But thank you for the great story until now.
I hope for the third possible option for the story, if your sister and you could decide on that. This way the continuation would not go against your ideas and there would still be a continuation. The second option would still be better than abandoning it comletely, but it might go in a completely different direction.
Best wishes!
Kiki1770 chapter 9 . 3/15
Hey author, in the event that you go with the first option and decide to officially close this fic, could we possibly have an outline of what your intentions for this story were?

Regardless of which decision you make, I really am grateful for the content you have provided up until now. Thank you for writing something so lovely and best of luck with your future projects :)
ChaoticInscriber chapter 9 . 3/15
*coos*
Papa!Shanks indeed.
Juheemin chapter 9 . 3/14
Ohhhh...I really liked this story...it's sad that you won't be continuing it yourself. But I hope for option 2 or 3 rather than this story completely being abandoned.
alice.fazio13 chapter 8 . 3/12
I lovethis story! Please update
Abbie CaDABbie chapter 1 . 3/5
Ty
soul of dark and light chapter 8 . 3/2
This is one amazingggg story. Cant wait to see what happens when Ace finds out about Sabo.
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