This is awesome man, so happy that you also realized that Kratos wasn't "Kratos'y" enough. Seeing him being affected by the taunts of team CRDL didn't bode well. I hope you continue my man!

Honestly, I just wanna watch Baldur fuck shit up in Remnant. He was easily the best antagonist (I say antagonist because I don't really see him as a villain) in the game and definitely the most compelling villain in the series due to his genuinely sympathetic backstory, awesome voice acting, and do I even need to talk about his theme? Deliverance is awesome.

Oooh. Will anything good even be able to be brought back from Remnant then at all of those improvements are temporary? At least I'd like to think the brothers would be able to make something that'll be the case.
Least there's a path home somehow thanks to them. I wonder how they'll find those secrets since they only found it before, going through the roof

Guess their time there at the school will be so short. Was kinda hoping for more time for interactions honestly to see how it'd be like.
The leg breaking thing was kinda funny though.
Guess it won't be until another time till Artreus will help out with Baludr too.

Word format could be a bit better.
Like making a new line when the speaker changes.
Like...
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Kratos took out his axe. The tip froze more violently now. "What do you want?" Baldur readied himself "What i want is to get back to Asgard, and i'm sure either the head, or the boy knows how."
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Into...
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Kratos took out his axe. The tip froze more violently now. "What do you want?"

Baldur readied himself "What i want is to get back to Asgard, and i'm sure either the head, or the boy knows how."

Least he studied enough to know that dust can just be a weak excuse for runic magic.
Wonder what the people will think if he uses any of the runic attacks.

The head as an illusion is probably the first lie that'll fail. Though it won't really mean much if it does anyways. Heh.

Different rooms rather than the same huh? Should have negotiated a little more there, Kratos doesn't really do charity haha.
Guess they really can't do that though, without saying they're from another realm.

Thinking about the 1st chapter... Mimir didn't really get to talk about the other realms, until they went to one.
I guess if he should have been the one to call out that they were possibly in an unknown realm, instead of Kratos.

Things are moving along okay.

Starting at a low point if their relationship huh? Interesting.

Also you got a few typos in this chapter.

Good job! You write fight scenes vividly in an entertaining way. Just keep working on your character/world building and you'll see a lot of improvement in your story.

I'm interested, but I think you really need to slow down the pacing especially from Ozpin's P.o.v. and think of it like it is a real situation. You're a headmaster, and a abnormally pale, blood red tattooed man along with a child and a decapitated head introduce themselves. And your first reaction is to recruit them? Not search for identification or at the very least be suspicious and question why the group of a "Huntsman" is unaware what a Grimm is?
I want to see this story do well, but it's honestly it's feeling lazy so far :/

Kinda fast introduction to Ozpin.

Stories where characters get transported to other dimensions come out better when characters get time to get used to the new place on their own. For example a couple of years before the main story line begins.

why is Ozpin always the one in control?

I like this idea and concept, but the scenes feel rushed. I think the pacing could be slower but otherwise I like it.

I hope kratos snapping baldur’s neck become a recurring joke kind of thing,where he gets mad for it happening over and over

Good to see that Baldur is persistent as ever lol, hopefully he stays away for a little longer this time, and Ozpin is probably going to welcome a battle with Salem compared to having Baldur and Kratos beating the piss out of each other and damaging his property over and over, but that's what happens when Gods clash, good chapter, excited for the next one.

Pretty good

Hmm nice but I can see kratos going to be say a little bit protective with atreus just because they are in a very strange land, and also of the fact that him,atreus, mimir, and also baldur being of magic which will attract unwanted attention from both ozpin and salem's factions.

Plus if ozpin does try to bring kratos and atreus into his war with Salem he will be coldly refused by kratos as he nor his son is not going to be dragged into someone else's war.

Also question when is this in the rwby verse because I know it's probably season 2 but is it before team rwby's plan on the white fang?

Good luck on the next chapter and hope it comes soon.