Damn this has lots of potential, I'd love to see new chapters

Seems like a good start

...that is actually original...pfft...XD HAHAHAHHAHAHABAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
THATS actually something nobody has tried to do!

An OC having the appearance of Diavolo in Fairy Tail has already gotten me interested. I like to know how they'll react to his appearance.

but good idea

balance dialogue and discription because your caracters only talk we have ni idea were they are so we can't put a scene/ picture as a background for the talk.