Takaoko Is Jared,19

like another reader said.
Me too i hope you will make naruto also a prodigy seal master and having his clan and family useful talents, and not only takaoko.
I don't like fics where the sibling have all the gifts and talents, with naruto being his canon talentless stupid (or barely smarter) self spamming clone and being below average (by clanless-civilian shinobi standard) without kyuubi chakra.

Like the chapter -

Hope the 3rd doesnt just take Takaoko word for it, that she doesnt mess with seals - after all she has one on her person nobody should play around with -
ANBU guards ?

will they report how she is treated ?
and is her playing with seals once more, the reason she gets a teacher for this subject in order for her not to kill herself or explode the village ?

And thanks for your thanks :)

I'm a little worried. They can't separate them right ? I mean, she will do something about it like going to see the Hokage to tell him that she will be separated from her brother and basically abandonned in the streets. Besides, why not tell him about the mistreatment at the orphanage and the unfair detentions at the academy ? I never understood this obstination to tell nothing and just let people do whatever they want without any form of punishment or retaliation.

I also thought about something. They are super young, right ? Little children are prone to act on their thoughts without really being rational about it. Why not make a scene where she decides to quit the village with her brother ? Then, obviously they are intercepted and the hokage ask why. First, she tells him that this entire village has something against them and mistreats them. She things its dangerous to live in this village. Besides, they constantly try to separate them and she won't tolerate it. She then says to him that its better for them to go elsewhere to have a better life and anyway it doesn't concerne him since they are just unimportant orphans.

The hokage will only have the choice to help them for good because obviously, he won't tell them the truth. It could be a good way to shake things, you know.

I love your writing style and your story too. I look forward to what happens next.

Love the rhythm of this thanks for updating

amazing

Well since apparently this story is undervalued by the number of followers and favourites - i saw the need to review -

So far i really like your story - especially the interactions between Naruto and your OC ... how they depend on each other and are the other ones sole world (splendidly written IMO)... i really hope it stays this way throughout the story.

Then this chapter really made my day, because you early on set the path for her and hopefully Naruto to eventually become seal masters - (i really dont like Naruto sibling fic in which only the sibling learns seals - if there is a distinction necessary ... make it by how they approach seals and perhaps have them be good at different sub-categories ... like barrier, space-time etc pp)
Furthermore you could make the red-head Uzumaki in a Karin clone - give her the sensing and chakra chain ability at least - not sure about the healing bite it is a doubleedged sword ...
and give her different summons - like the salamander of Hanzo - seems like the only other canon summon aside from those in the hands of even that seemed to be on par with the ones the Sannin had.

Furthermore if manage to not screw up some jutsu in your fanfic (see my profile page for what i mean with that) you can consider me a reader of your story for a long time to come.

This was a good chapter and props to sister Uzumaki for fighting back against her brothers bullies good luck on your next update

amazing this is good

cool I like it

We all want to be remembered.

Not exactly a fan of this chapter -
Since the Naruto world technological advances are so vague throughout the series (we have walkie talkies, fridges but no real long range communication device they use birds and this really strange chakra based one during the war, then there is no gun-powder, guns etc technology is all over the place with no theme ... and for the most part makes no fucking sense ), i dont like it that you essentially generated a precedence with this, stating that they know and can use electricity.

I always find it better in Naruto for the world to be more medieval and "technology" that is needed is based upon seals or something ... well we will see where this is going ...

I honestly prefer longer chapters in stories but if it’s easier for you to write shorter chapters it’s alright

Tbh I never enjoyed a Naruto sister oc fanfiction before but I really enjoyed this one so far , goodluck on your next update