Finally married! My fear, that they would wait, was unnecessary. Viktor dying is very sad part of this story. Although its disheartening how cruel teenager and rumors can be, when they arent properly informed. Quidditch, quidditch, quidditch, I personally have no problem with it. That bit with Harry having problems to sleep is a bit frightning. Wow, big blow for Lily, that she cant survive without Harry. Though I pity Bill, when one of the three dies, because then everyone would be dead (Harry, Ginny, Lily) except him. Wow, rather shocking end, though I suspected something vile to happen, because till the last chapter, it was relatively angst-free. Though Im not so sure, when they did it and who the girl/mother is. Voldemort is now reborn again, this time in a strong body. Im sure, I will enjoy the next book aswell.
Keep up your good work!
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The wedding is finally moving forward! I hope they dont regret not doing it as soon as possible, because life showed them, the worst outcome is not so far away. It will take a long time for Ginny to forgive Molly after all that she did. Though Bill and Charlie talking the twins down on getting Harry pissed was downright scary, but unfortunately entirely necessary.
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Now they it, that Harry is one. Poor Lily. Wow, the six of them have a really large impact to the whole school. I suspect they will need it, when the time comes. They are right, they cant tell Ginny of the Horcrux within Harry, while forcing her not to tell him. That would be unfair!
A bonded animal for Luna! Yay! I rather fear for the plans Voldemort and Narcissa are breeding, they dont bode well for the future of them all...
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Luna could have handled that better, though the easiest option would be to select Neville for the sperm donor and they wouldnt have to be included into the ritual.
Another horcrux is destroyed, they are getting closer to the end. Though I believe the horcrux within Harry is not yet dealt with.
Rather intresting theory about the Horcruxes, Im looking forward how it will impact your story.

Rather shocking that betrothal contract between Daphne and Neville, but given how backwards the wizarding world is in some things, it shouldnt be.
That the little girl was the daughter of the Dursleys is rather shocking and she has magic! So they did the right thing in taking her before others could.
Fire always need oxygen, so Im really surprised, that it is the first time I read about being able to extinguish Fiendfyre like that in a fanfiction.
Was it mentioned before that Harry could be a Horcrux? Or was this the first time?
Getting married so young is a bit cliche, but I think it fits perfectly to both of them in your story. Though it will be hard to take care of Rose during those weeks. But Im sure Harry and Ginny will handle it, just like they handle everything else the world throws at them.
Another question is, with the betrothal between Neville and Daphne, how can Daphne be Lady Flint? Keep up your good work!
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Dont know how I lost track of this for about 8 months. I should probably update my mail account, so I get the notifications.
I always knew Lucius was a sick bastard. But to do that to your first born son is truly disgraceful. Though, I dont want any Malfoy getting that title, because I think his sibling will be just as bad, with how he will be raised. Its unfair to Draco, but a small part of my mind, enjoys that fact.
Finally they found out, that Ron has been collaborating with Malfoy, he started it with the wrong reason, but found the "right path" soon enough. Now I hope, he wont be found out by Malfoy in the future.
Which girl did the Goddess save from something? Was it Ginny and what was done exactly? Embarassing to receive the talk with your partner right next to you.
A rather determined Ginny has ways to work for her, you cant even imagine.
How they treat Daphne is how you treat your friends! Even though Harry takes it a bit far, Im sure Daphne appreciate it (even if its just in secret).
Keep up your good work!
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I have read all the stories in this series four times. I think you are a great writer. After I go through all the stories completed I read something else. I come back to your stories and read all completed again.

can't say I saw that coming

Ahhhhh... Amazing story. But but but, you can't stop yet... Please. I need more. I need to read the rest of the story, the rest of the series from your twist. I NEED MORE!

I can't stop reading... This is an amazing take on the story as a whole. Let me know if you need another beta reader

I rarely comment on old and finished stories, but as commendable it is for Hermione to step down and recommend Parvati, it would be more commendable if she didn't recommend a DEAD girl. But beside minor mistakes absolutely brilliant, if sometimes brutal to the feelings, story

umm... wasn't Parvati kissed by a dementor? Kind of hard for Hermione to pass the prefect badge to her. Otherwise loving the story as usual.

Cosmyk

great chapter. im just trying to remember when the rape took place.

This chapter, was by far the most brutal and heartwrenching chapter I've yet seen. Absolutely amazing writing. It is very rare that I have the rug pulled out from under me when reading, and you managed to do it flawlessly. Very well done. You have cemented my opinion that this is one of, if not the best, fanfics I have ever read. It has truly been worth every moment reading these books the past few years. For so long I have wanted a dark, gritty, but well written version of the Harry Potter series, and you have nailed it. 11/10, and as always, I look forward to the next chapter in this amazing series.

wow that was this after all. I thought we were going to see a flashback to the moment Harry was raped. why was I in doubt when it happened, was it in the fourth year? remind me please. the child they used in the ritual was harry's son with whom? Narcissa? is the child really dead? our I had several doubts kkk but I loved it. I look forward to the continuation and I hope you can present us with the first time of Harry and Ginny, he was a big NC fan hahahha. again, congratulations