Reviews for Christmas Cake
Rabby16 chapter 3 . 5/22
KOMI-SAN!
typersnyder chapter 3 . 5/10
Komi? The Komi?
HighPaladinRath chapter 3 . 5/9
Komi-San is born! wait... her parents are genderbent tho!
HighPaladinRath chapter 2 . 5/9
Holy shit... I'm in a gigantic fluff cloud!
xXCactusGamingXx chapter 3 . 4/12
Pretty sure this is the most cliche story you've written. Not that's it's not good, but it's of a power quality that most of your stuff.
MisfitWatcher chapter 3 . 2/29
I imagined her saying she wanted a baby and that mental image nearly killed me five times...
MisfitWatcher chapter 2 . 2/29
My fucking heart.
Im The Person chapter 3 . 12/26/2019
Why can’t there be more?!
Darian2704 chapter 3 . 11/5/2019
I'm headcanoning Komi-san is the official IzuYui child
TheImortalAce chapter 3 . 10/27/2019
it's so wholesome and adorable and I want more XD
loved it chapter 3 . 10/19/2019
my name says it all!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/19/2019
Epilogue: as it turned out, Komi inherited her mother’s miscommunication and her father’s rather innocent demeanor. As the daughter of the number one, her high grades, and her stoic demeanor, she had difficulty actually making any friends. Until one day...
Deltablacknaruto chapter 3 . 10/20/2019
Please make this ship sail! If anyone is gonna do it, it will probably be you.
DarthLexxor chapter 3 . 10/20/2019
I am running out of ways to say that you did an amazing job, so I'll simply tell you what I loved about this story:
1: The uniqueness. This was such a new experience and it was wonderful due to how new it was. While I love the usual girls you choose to write, ie zany, fun, happy, and with a sexdrive that could make anyone jealous, this was totally new. Even with the ending she felt entirely new.

2: The shortness. This story was fluffy as hell and I love that. But like someone once said "things like that are like sugar, and leave you two choices. Use it sparingly or make the literary equivalent of caramel." This was Carmel. And just like Carmel it is best in small amounts, so the three part structure really helped.

3:Scavenger hunts in stories. Romantic scavenger hunts are my kryptonite because they are so fluffy and you blew this one away.

All of this to say, great job and I can't wait to see what is coming next!
61394 chapter 3 . 10/20/2019
good story
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