I don't like Lucy and Erza is just to domineering.

Hey I wish you luck man. Everything is hard with the virus going around. Stay safe and healthy.

ugh this story is awsome but for the love of god, toss zeref out of his head its just creepy to haveanother human inyour head all the time its not like hes an animal like kyubi inside of naruto its so creepy it just creep me thefk out

we'll be waiting

It's cool bro. Life is hard right now don't worry about. Sorry about your relative btw.

What's with Natsu not knowing he's traveled forward in time? In that vein, I noticed when he went back you listed the date as X771. He and the other dragon slayers originally lived in the 300s. They traveled forward through the eclipse gate to X777. I'm not saying you didn't know that, but you certainly forgot it when labeling dates.

How is this story not getting attention. This is great and the world building and romance is amazing.

Hope you family gets through this without further problems and good luck on finding a new job

Hmm, I'm guessing that Brandish might be part of the harem as well. As for my other guess... Irene
Belserion maybe?

Take your time bro :) so far i like how this story go

That's cool and all, but where's my nibba Kratos?

Overall you're writing is pretty good, but you have room for improvement. For example, more than one character shouldn't talk in the same paragraph of dialogue. Take this for example:

(The man shook his head. "As generous as that is, you've saved us, I insist you keep this reward, you've certainly earned it," insisted the chief. Natsu gave a smile. "If it is mine then I choose to give half to the village," he said as he gave him one of the bags. The chief smiled. "Thank you for your help and I hope you come visit some time. Fairy Tail will always have our support," he said giving the dragon slayer a slight bow.)

This is an example of how not to do it. It's okay to have something small, like Happy replying "Aye Sir!" to something Natsu says. Other than that, any sentence of length from another character requires a new paragraph.

Two things I noticed. Firstly, I think it was Zeref that said it was 771. Unless he is keeping the time travel from 377 to 477 secret from Natsu, that is a mistake. Although it's entirely possible he is just keeping it secret.

The second thing I noticed was that the names of the Abyss and Lightning dragons don't really fit the naming theme of the rest or the dragons in the series. They are more western/european, with a bit of fantasy inspiration. For example Igneel (related to Ignis, Latin for fire). Weisslogia has german inspiration. Skiadrum has norse/Danish inspiration. I suspect Metalicana has spanish/Latin inspiration (though I'm not certain). Grandeeney I'm not sure of, but it definitely is more western and European. So for Daku and Arashi to have Japanese inspired names just doesn't make sense. I think you let the anime fan in you get the best of you and you accidentally ignored the fact that Dragons in Fairy Tail have European names.

why Ur in the list though?
she already gone that why Grey in Fairy tail right?
you know tragedy of his life
I prefer Eileen than her though, she a dragon and Erza mother and she still look young just like Erza but the more mature aura around her.

I just share my opinion so you can just ignore it
if you want..
to ignore it.

Damn, I’m liking this story a lot already. I look forward to more! But do take your time with it. Happy New Years to you good sir!