What a strange yet fun concept!

Please Update!

Loved this,hope you update soon

This was an interesting read, can't wait for an update.

Can we see the trial from the Arcobaleno's pov?

Thank you

niiice

you know what, that's fine. the demon known as writers block gets everyone at some point. the fact that you finished the chapter even with it affecting you is a sign of how dedicated you are... i'm afraid i can't say the same for myself. i have so many good ideas that could become wonderful stories, but i never get past the first chapter.

thank you for the update! i really like the ideas of the story.

Love the update! Am excited to see where this’ll go yay.

Okay. I thought I read 18 or 17. I would've died on the inside if so. (I'm on mobile so I had to do and check)

I really, really, really, really, really like this fanfic so far. It's absolutely amazing and I would sacrifice a body part for this story.

Man, this made me forget about my rice. I almost didn't finish eating it lololol

That being said, *drum roll please*, I hope you continue to update this and thank you for writing this in the first place! okay bye-bye

*chokes heavily on rice*

WHYYYYYY

AHHHHHHH

Ah.

wait.

when did you last update?

Reborn- My student's better then yours!

Skull- No, mine is!

*gunshots and bow twags ring out*

Excited for the next chapter!

I can't wait for the new chapter! Susan is such a great choice for the cloud arcobaleno and it's a unique take on his immortality and earlier life. Now I am just waiting to see the KHR get introduced to the strangeness that is Narnia just how much time had passed there.