Every time I pass by your account, I can’t help but pull my hair in frustration. So many good ideas for naruto fanfics, a good grammar and yet it seems like you are unable to develop them.
Worst thing, you always have to go overboard with your Damned DBZ mentality. For you, Everything has to explode at interplanetary level.
You restarted this fic three times and three times you made it into a godlike pissing contest. it’s no-sense, and gets boring after short.
Hope the best for you and I hope to come back one day and find this fic more sober and more enjoyable.

P.S. try with just one girl (I personally prefer Tayuya), harem stories have few ways to be good and many ways to suck. Like I said before, make it more simple and sober.

Dude you just basically made Yakumo god mode. Gotta be honest, i doubt she could use most of her abilities, she wouldn't have the chakra to do so. Gotta imagine that powerful genjutsu use a lot of chakra.

Gotta assume why Sharingan can control the Tailed Beasts is due to its origins more than just a genjutsu or im pretty sure we would have heard of them being controlled all the time. I mean why would they even be considered a problem if a genjutsu would deal with them? The only mention we see of them being controlled that i recall is with the Sharingan/Rinnegan with Yagura and Kurama and the others during the war.

You know, im actually beginning to think this would be better as a single pairing. It just seems that anyone else would feel forced into the pairing.

Also, would be nice for the pairing to be Yakumo and no one else. She is in few fics as is and out of that very limited number half or more are her lumped in with a bunch of other girls.

Well, Naruto doesn't actually lack strategy, he lacks planning ahead. He is actually rather strategically inclined while fighting and comes up and executes good plans on the fly. It is actually pre-planning that he lacks, mostly due to his lack of emotional control.

This seems good so far, rare pairing is always welcome. Hope you didn't drop it, looking forward for next.

I still don't think ido could hold a candle to kurama! To be honest I'm not sure it was the sharingan's genjutsu ability that allowed it to control kyuubi but rather its' connection with the sage of six paths because if you remember hashirama was also able to subdue bijuu with his bloodline connected with the sage. Ido not having such a connection couldn't even hope to effect kurama. That is not even mentioning the fact th as t cooperative jinchuuriki's tend to nullify the effect of even those connected abilities.

espero anciosamente un nuevo capitulo esta increible continua esta historia

I need moarrrrr of this in my life. I love the fact that you use yakumos immensely strong genjutsu ability in this fic is definitely a great point for me. Keep on going and I completely agree with what you are thinking about the series.

It’s not the fact that genjutsu can control the Bijuus it’s mostly that the sharingan can control them due to it coming from the God tree and their relationship to it. Also it have to be a mangekyo. If it was just genjutsu a lot of users would have been able to do so as well. It’s just like with Hasharama moukton, it was able to control them due to its connection to the shinju. They messed up the entire story has it gone on that was still a relevant thing that if you look close you would see.

So I loved this chapter, but I really hate that cliffhanger... Anyway thanks for the good chapter.

Great chapter!

Wow!

But what about Minato? He is there to stop the rupture of the seal and Kushina if it is worse. How is that they are not there? Or are they?

I don’t like otsutsuki arc either. I think with Madara arc and sixth path separating the juubi into 9 to to stop the strong juubi and being the first jinshuriki it was enough.

So I tend to forget about it and Boruto, because is as bad as Harry Potter crapilogue.

Hinata was the super creepy stalker, Naruto deserved better, so no!
Sasuke never in my mind atone for himself in any way so better lose that battle and the end!

I have my tinfoil hat and decide to read the manga until then and forget about the stupid things that come next.

Except Kakashi gaiden, because it was interesting.

I like Yakumo and the Princess of the land of snow, and the shion.

Naruto had a lot of better prospects and to protect a lot of gils who deserve batter.

This was amazing. I didn't expect things to go as they did. Poor kurama, genjutsu will forver remain his weakness. It is ironic that kurama is famous for falling for genjutsu while the clan with the most powerful genjutsu is also named kurama. Love how you portrayed the Ido. Wonder how Naruto and yakumo will survive this. Also wonder where are the imprints Minato and Kushina left in the seal. Can't wait to read more

Thus is great. Love how Naruto defeated kiba. Love how much he and yakumo improved. I love how you described what Naruto was feeling when yakumo's father took her away. So love your description of the demon, damn that was scary.

Excellent chapter. I love the interaction between Naruto and yakumo. Chibi Naruto's were excellent. Like how they are covering each other's weakness and are planning on training together. That genjutsu of yakumo is seriously op and scary. I am guessing that was Ido at the end( the demon yakumo has in canon).