I personally like the story title.

Nice, great chapter. You can fell the tension in the air while reading it.

You need to fix the long paragraphs with the many dialogues in then, it becomes very hard to read and to know who is saying what. The first 2 chapters didn’t have this problem.

Enjoying the story, keep it up

I feel like Scarlett is going to go the mindbreak path to try and keep Light but with the pairing tag I have hope that Ebony will have his back.

Keep it up?

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