Loved this back in AO3. Just wanted to contribute here. Really like the way you wrote this. Really cryptic. Like the first part of the remake lol. Hope you do more interesting stuff in the future.

I love this. This couple is my favorite and I'm so happy they are making the remake! Please post up more stories!

This is well-written and really good, but I would suggest a stronger beginning to the story, like maybe some foreshadowing. Great idea for a fic!