As your story stands apart from Athena using magic, this is no different from the show. If you want to insert an OC, you should add some flare to the original script. For example you had Athena, a detective, assist in attacking Cyberbiotics. You could have had Athena get into trouble with her superiors for doing that, which could have been a great consequence.

Great chapter on gargoyles: daughter of two worlds, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

I really like your story, I can't wait to find out more

I’m so giddy about the Puck episode coming up soon- can’t remember how many episodes but I can “see” how many ways it would go

Speaking of arrowverse...does this mean you’re going to add more DC comics to the mix- even if it’s just the JLDark team? I can see Athena getting pissed at John Constantine for consistently using her husband, and her getting along with Zatanna. Not to mention Zatanna getting along with Elisa. Then again I can hear her arguing with Clark and Diana about her family “the only one that is dangerous is my mother! She went off the rails centuries ago!”

Then again it’s possible that Athena and Jason also have fought against Macbeth a few times over the years.

Also will this eventually get moved to The DC crossover section?

Great chapter and looking forward to the next one

I was on board with the idea, but you didn't change anything. You introduced a new character but gave her the same lines that were already said. Yeah, you put in great descriptions and even put in extra lines but it doesn't change the story in the slightest. I might as well rewatch the series. Good try, nice effort... But ultimately not enough.

Great story and all, but from what I learned and understood, King Arthur was on the isle of Avalon long before the gargoyles were trapped in their stone sleep; so the beginning of this chapter doesn’t make since chronologically.

Great chapter on gargoyles: daughter of two world's, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

Loved it!

love it! update asap

Totally stoked for the next chapter! Please continue!

loved it! more please?!

Hooray! More Fics with Jason Blood and Etrigan! You have my complete attention now!

Jason Blood?