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sorry looks good so far

Good update keep it up

what kinda bitch ass nigga kisses the bitch who cheats on him wtf

No problemo, nice chapter

This literally made no sense. Zeus forced Hestia to summon her Champion, and the punished her champion for "daring" to come to Olympus. What in the hell is going on? This is all just forced for the sake of it.

Nice chappter there, hope you update soon

Why take the memories away?

Solid first chapter. Hope u continue. Thanks

Pls do chapter 6 where the hunter’s grow to like him

any idea when the next chappie will be?

That was a little quick don't you think? Going from the greatest mortal woman dying to "OK new mom"

This was a pretty good chapter! I really liked how you showed the merciless, man-hating feature of Artemis and I can't wait to see how she and Percy end up in a relationship (which should be later on, if you do the character development correctly, hopefully). Please update soon!

-ShadowThanatos

I chuckled at the ending A/N. Another great chapter filled with amazing detail! I can tell that this will just be a reoccurring thing, so I won't continue to review if it is just going to be about your amazing descriptions. I will only review if I find something new that I feel I should either compliment you on or let you know what you could've done better (in my opinion).

Very good first chapter! So far, this seems like the beginning of a typical Chaos story, but I am a person that likes detail, and this first chapter is a great hook chapter (I know because it hooked me, and I have read chapters like this multiple times!). What I am trying to say is, you made a chapter that multiple people have read, into a well written, well detailed chapter that makes me wanna read more! Great job!