Reviews for Something Ends, Something Begins
Immortal Potatoe chapter 16 . 5/21
Good stuff man
lullabydono chapter 16 . 5/11
sorry to hear that you got sick but I am glad that you and yours are doing okay.

I am loving this! i wish more people would translate more stories to English because if this is a good example of what they have to offer I am almost upset i have been missing out because i only know one language! sigh. i guess I am just going to have to learn to read in different languages.

but seriously, this is a very well done oc fanfic and i am so looking forward to reading more! don't keep me waiting too long or I'll go mad! lol
About chapter 16 . 5/3
Love the story. However it took a lot fo months to just get this far... That has me worried. With the amount of fics I read, there's a good chance I will forget about this one due to the slow update rate.

That said. It's quality save for a few minor incorrect words is amazing. I would love to binge read it all someday when it's all translated and uploaded.

It sucks about corona, but I'm glad you recovered from it.
kanachan876 chapter 16 . 4/20
hope you get better soon.
kanachan876 chapter 4 . 4/20
i am exited to explore such romance conflict about her mother. huhu
kanachan876 chapter 2 . 4/20
kurenai was like 14 to 15. wow so young.
nyuszika9510 chapter 16 . 4/7
Firstly, I'm happy for your recoveri. Secondly, thanks for the new chapter! :D I hope we can get the next soon.
Cam.Katarn chapter 16 . 4/5
Isn't Kurenia a bit young to be her mother should would only have been in her teens when she had Hitomi?
knetterzak chapter 16 . 4/5
Thank you for updating. I hope you and your family are doing alright. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Blueowl chapter 16 . 4/5
Glad to see an update and glad you're feeling better (I hope). Can't wait to see her talk to Naruto as well as how the teachers will respond to her. Thanks for continuing.
firewhiskeyP chapter 15 . 2/9
here comes Naruto! would be most amazing if Naruto and Gaara have each other growing up
Shirokuma96 chapter 15 . 2/9
I like history. please keep writing
Blueowl chapter 15 . 2/9
Glad she's still writing to Gaara and that she's settling back into Konoha life. I wonder if she'll be able to do anything about the Uchiha massacre. Also wondering how Naruto and the others will respond to her.
Looking forward to more :)
firewhiskeyP chapter 14 . 2/2
awwww. Hitomi's relationship with Ensui is so endearing and important to the both of them. will be most exciting if Hitomi's grandfather trained her like Ensui did. It is her heritage too
Blueowl chapter 14 . 2/2
Sweet _
Chakra beast, shadow user.
Looking forward to more.
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