Reviews for Raven
Achilles Bahadur chapter 28 . 7/19
I dont know why you make an axe for MC. I just think throw and attack with axe only slow MC down. its better to use spell rather than an axe. well perhaaps strength overcome the speed. if it says so, then I understand.
anzafay21 chapter 54 . 7/19
Thanks for the story! It was really fun to read your crossover and see your interpretation of what harry would be like in the marvel verse. Loved every bit of it and how the story progressed and how you incorporated him into each of the story arcs. Keep up the amazing work! Looking forward to reading your other stories!
Kushka chapter 54 . 7/16
Great story
Kaiimei chapter 1 . 7/18
I...was excited for this story, it looked interesting, still does honestly.

My problem is just...well, in general the writing is so off-putting. I mean, take this line for example. "Harry Black sir, you requested information regarding him "we have none"

What even is that? One of my biggest irks for any story is such blatant incorrect writing. "Harry Black, sir. You requested information regarding him...we have none." That's all it takes. But whatever, maybe you aren't a native English speaker or something.

So, while I like the idea, the execution just falls flat for me based on these errors, sorry.

Take care boo!
Achilles Bahadur chapter 10 . 7/17
only two wives is okay
jd3 chapter 29 . 7/17
Amazing.
fdean80090 chapter 54 . 7/16
Fabulous story. Thank you.
Frank
Lahmikhara chapter 54 . 7/15
While personally I prefer stories that move away from the canon plotlines, I can honestly say I enjoyed your writing.
There were some things that could have gone better in my opinion however. Most of it came down to Harry simply being to strong and never really being in any danger. It made the rest of the cast feel more like a sideshow watching Harry kicking arse instead of valuable members of the fights whom made a difference. Judging from some of the author's notes you realised that already though so I won't harp about it. xD
As for the Hela thing... being familiar with Norse mythology that whole part of the MCU just never made any sense to me to be honest. In the way of the MCU you really did her justice imo, personally I just can't get my head around everything that's wrong with that when you look at the mythology. Can't blame you for that one though of course. That's on the MCU!

When it comes to the personalities of the main characters, the were well done. They were recognisable, had their own opinions and quircks and were believable. Good job on those it was one of the strengths of this story in my opinion.

Personally I hope the next story you write will go more AU instead of staying close to Canon like this one. All in all though I never got bored with this story, which means your writing by itself is definitely captivating enough to pull me into the story.

Sincerely,

Lahmikhara
TheMostPeculiarSerb1995 chapter 14 . 7/13
Mate, seriously, don't be a wimp, and stop apologising to everyone and saying that you cannot please all of us. It's your f*cking story, if some people don't like it, they can bloody well stop reading! That being said, I enjoy reading not only this one, but your other stories as well, so, ignore the whinging bitches and keep on writing! Warmest regards from a slightly unhinged Serb.
Harrypotter. peverell chapter 54 . 7/13
Great Story, Nice portraying of Characters, Quite Good Cliff Hangers... only issue is Grammar... Writing style and Use if Vocabulary is good but grammatical mistakes may shadow everything... Just Let someone proof-read your story for any and all Grammar errors... Good Writing, Keep it up...
Helily chapter 54 . 7/12
What an unexpected ending. It’s a happy one for sure even if I personally hate the idea of anyone giving up immortality — who would do that? So crazy. But this is Harry so it makes sense I guess. Some people...but anyway, just want to thank you. I devoured this story last night (eyes still burn a bit from staying up late heh — worth it) and I had fun. I enjoyed the humor and it didn’t cause me any stress with too much angst or drama or relationship issues. So refreshing. First time I read a story with this pairing, too. Didn’t appeal to me and yet the way you handled it made it okay. Who knows, I might even grow to like it when I read other fics now.

All of this is to let you know I am grateful you write. Thanks for all the effort and time on your part and for completing (will likely check out your other works because of it). Also, love long fics.

(After reading your AN, okay I will steer clear of your ‘’lightning curse’’ story) (uh oh, now it’s making want to check it out...uh...) XD
Guest chapter 54 . 7/9
hey.. ur stories r awesome especially i like the witty, sassy heroes and the action .. i just hope in any of ur xvers u bring thanos too.. thanks
Andrew Lee Houghton chapter 29 . 7/8
I know u all doing rewrite on this but what happened to shield as u basically took out most of the hidden operatives in shield
EvilLittleWizard chapter 14 . 7/8
So Harry is basically like Deadpool
LittleCrybaby13 chapter 21 . 7/7
i hope frigga doesn't die in this story. i would hate it if harry has to lose someone as good as frigga
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