"Lets say that the sea does not like to be contained."

but contained you are. and forever will be *sigh*

I mean the stories long adn the writings ok. but Percy and the other heroes and villains seem flat. so even though I'm interested I can't read further. I'm glad I found that out now instead of 1-2 hours later.

so what if he complains the whole time while completing what he was ordered to do that still makes him theirs. he still has to answer to the league. he still has that leash. he has to answer to the senior league members. at its core he now their tool to use. doesn't matter if their using kindness and duty to make him accept that. they ask and he answers and considering their superheroes we're never going to see him ever say no.

these asshole in ever fic I've seen are always showing up in their life and then deciding it for them. so what if he decided to be a hero. they strong armed him to it anyway. no way in hell they wouldve let him off into the wind. reading this pisses me off so dann much when the MC is forced into something. in this case being one of the league's lapdogs until they decide to give him the trident back in like... forever.

these bitches fucking had the balls to kidnap him after saving their palace and are now interrogating him. fuck the jl

ah, why won't he kill. he killed like right!? come on!

This book was amazing
I really hope you decide to do a sequel
Perhaps one with "Lord" Darkseid in it

So he joins them? PATHETIC lol there would be zero chance that he would join them if anything he would be solo or would just get asked for help if they needed him like dsrkseid

it was getting better and then at the end you just had to throw in another nunu. I don't understand why it bothers me so much, no other fics have small things like this that bother me this much. guess you just found my one weakness. The rest of the fic is still good though, so ill read this one though completely this time. ill probably enjoy it so long as I tune out the NUNU's

ah, I just remembered why I stopped reading this last time. I know backseat drivers are annoying but I'm gonna act like one anyway. Perry should have put up more of a fight, he submitted to the leagues wishes way to fast, and joining the B-team? even with these circumstances that is just patently ridiculous. if he can tie with Diana he should not join the b-team I dotn care what his role is or how old he is it doesn't make sense. also, one last thing

WHY DOES HE SAY NUNU?! I don't understand what that's supposed to be! who talks like that?

I mean I like the general idea of this fic but jesus the execution could use some work.

Wow, this story is incredible. Like seriously it's deep and just awe-inspiring. Will there be more to this, like an epilogue or something? Or a sequel showing the world recovering, the new earth gods fitting in with their new power and the other new genisis gods, potentially a conflict with darkseid and maybe a minor confrontation between the guardians and the new earth gods when they inevitably try to force restrictions on them like with new genisis. There is so much potential you could do with this story and you could have nico as a more regularly recurring character

Damn was hoping he wouldn’t roll over and actually join the justice league... hoping he went solo but he is a beta so it’s a drop

Percy just keeps forgetting he has a card with unlimited cash lol

Well it is the cliche fanfic beginning anyway

The first chapter is cringy

That comment about tipping is so true. As an ex waiter making 2/hr, you’re literally living off of tips