The supposed Brightest Witch opts for aggressive and willful stupidity while actively ignoring her husband's voluntarily given unbreakable vow, his sword-delivering Patronus, his failure to interrogate her about Potter's whereabouts or WTF they were doing on the run, his failure to force her to have sex despite his detailed explanation as to why not having sex could get them both killed, his suspicious conversations with Dumbledore, his rapport w/ Dumbledore's portrait, and him flat out begging her to see the truth... and she can't even cough up an apology? I was really hoping Sev was gonna make her work for it...

Nice fic, this one as well. I loved the final twist afout who the past-visiting Severus really was, totally didn't see it coming but it was just what the story needed.

Snape is OOC. As if he is just any other male heroine.

Hmm.. I seriously love your style of writing. And the lemons are very nice.
Worthy read for mature.
But.. I gotta stop here as it all seems a bit unrealistic.. I found it unrealistic at the very beginning as my Snape, the one that I have in my mind after reading 1000 of Snape fics wouldn’t do these things.. and I might be a bit too impatient. But this just ain’t for me, it seems based very heavy on the lemons..

But definitely worth a read for lemon lovers. And Ron and Harry are adorable.

xxx

Good grammar.
Thought at first this story was only made for the sake of the lemon idea.
Good lemons I must say.
I prefer the lemonade to tequila. Lol.
But I feel like there’s more to this than meets the eye.. so I’ll read on.

You gave the baby the initials "ASS," ha ha. Were you aware of that?

You should use a beta-reader.

That was a great story. Thanks for writing it.

Great read!

This was a really enjoyable read and once I started, I couldn't put it down until it was finished.

Loved this story and such a cute ending:)

Really great story, but a little too explicit for me...

Loved it!

Loved it!

wonderful!