| Reviews for Fading Light |
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  Kaysie chapter 11 . 9/3/2008 Thank you for not having anything happen I agree that such things are totally gross |
 phoenixfeather4 chapter 4 . 2/17/2005 If possible, could you respace the chapters? I use FireFox, the spaces between the paragraphs are far too wide from where I am. As for technical details, get a beta-reader if possible, you have some simple grammar and spelling errors which have been obviously run through a spellcheck, but not a human. It takes away from the flow of the story. Your plot is interesting, but you need to flesh out the characters a bit more. Nice job on the names though, they work for the characters and their race and personalities. Very nicely done. many authors have awkward sounding names or name that don't exactly fit the character and their occupation. |
| crazyAZNkid chapter 2 . 12/11/2004 CHECK YOUR ELVISH! You can't just make it up. Tis not right. The stories pretty good though. |
| Estel Star-Kindler chapter 14 . 8/19/2004 WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWZERS! THAT WAS AMAZING! Its taken me a couple of days to plough through it but WOW! You're an amazing writer! I can't wait for more of your stuff! Well done! Loadsa love, Estel x |
| Fair Lady Miriel chapter 2 . 7/31/2004 Very cool! |
| HarryEstel chapter 14 . 7/9/2004 Brilliant! I loved every moment of it! So many twists and turns, I could hardly predict what would happen next! Keep up the great work! |
| merlyn1382 chapter 14 . 7/8/2004 i hope that there will be a sequel to this one cause i love it |
| Tithen Min chapter 14 . 7/4/2004 I'm so sorry I missed the last chapter of this! I don't know how I managed that... Sorry! Fantastic story mellon, and yay! I love happy endings! Another brilliant story finished! :) I love your stories...(hint hint...) Anyway gotta run, well done mellon nin! Huggles, .:Tithen Min:. |
| grumpy chapter 14 . 7/1/2004 good ending to your story, loved the story, glad that everyone is alive, even if they all should be in bed. would love to read a sequel. |
| KissTheRainGirl12489 chapter 14 . 6/29/2004 Sequel sequel sequel sequel is definately on the list!Oh and thanks for the recomendation.I definately check it out. |
| Red Tigress chapter 14 . 6/29/2004 Yo, Shanny! I'm in an internet cafe right now on my day off. I'll try to stop by the mO sites if I have enough money! I bought a 3rd Naruto manga and a DNAngel one today., Tell everyone I say 'hi'! Anyways, nice ending! Wow, you CAN write happy endings. Well, I hope to see maybe another update next week when I come back to the internet cafe! Bye bye, now! |
| leggylover03 chapter 14 . 6/29/2004 AH The fluff was sweet as always. Good fic and I hope to see more from you. |
| evila-elf chapter 1 . 6/29/2004 0.0 Just found this. A bit late to read more atm, but I will most definately be back! Very interesting! |
| Zammy chapter 14 . 6/28/2004 Yay happy ending, I do hope you do write a sequel to this tale. |
