When's the next part?!

PLEASE MAKE MORE . This fan fic is sooooooo good . I absolutely love this ️️️️️️️

Eeeeeeee. So cute!. Garu blushing adorable. TOBE, HOW DARE YOU POISON PUCCA

Beautiful!(claps and cries)

I really appreciated the premise of this, and so far you haven't disappointed! The writing is concise, and the interactions are very cute! My one piece of feedback is that there are certain moments where the back-and-forth between characters feels a little choppy, and not as smooth or easy to read. It's a common issue even for accomplished writers, and it's fixed by trying to use characters full names sparingly when it's one-one-one. "He" and "She" flows smoother than interrupting the writing with another mention of their name.
Well done, I've enjoyed this first chapter and would like to see more from you!

This chapter was so cute! I love the interactions between Garu and Pucca. I can’t wait yet lol kind of scare to see what happens next.

I love it! Please tell me there will be another chapter!

Ohhhhh it was so lovely! I can't believe I haven't seen your new history. I've been reading old Pucca fanfics because of the lack of new ones. It is really pretty! I would love to read a second chapter. Garucca is never too much!
BTW, I really appreciate the way you write, the grammar in place and everything, thank you!