Cute.

Name: Archedpaw (Archedrain)
Age: 7 moons
Clan: Any Clan needed
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Lesbian
Appearance: Skinny black she-cat with the left half of her face scarred, amber eyes.
(The left side of her face is scarred, the eye is gone, and some of her teeth in that side of her muzzle is showing.)
Personality: Quiet, mumbles to herself, talks backward, is very jumpy, aggressive if someone sneaks up on her, and very weird. (Randomly stares at stuff too.)
Mother: Haredash (Very pale gray she-cat, blue eyes; died giving birth)
Brother: Graypaw

Name: Graypaw (Graysong)
Age: 7 moons
Clan: Same as Archedpaw's
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Bisexual
Appearance: Bulky soft-gray tom with a white chest, tail-tip, ears and paws, baby blue eyes.
Personality: Very protective over his sister, usually seen taking care of her like a mother would. He's very sweet to cats who understand, and once someone gets to know him, he's friendly, helpful and more of a mother-hen than anything.
Mother: Haredash
Sister: Archedpaw

You did Cloudstride and Duskstep's personality perfectly...Poor Birdkit, I hope Swiftsight is ok.

Wow, Cloudstar is mean, but luckily Willowstar is nice
I hope Swiftsight is alright

Excited to begin this! If you’re still accepting characters...

Name: Coldkit/Coldpaw/Coldsun

Gender: f

Appearance: small diluted tortie with a white chest and flash on her nose, a very pink nose, a white paw, and dark blue eyes, very very small

Personality(I shouldn't have to say this, but please be descriptive): Originally very timid and shy to the point she has problems talking to most cats, noticeable anxiety, and skittishness, but also deeply compassionate and caring. As she gets older she gets braver though still quiet and kind she is more openly passionate about what she cares about and whether or not she agrees with something and while nonviolent to a large extent is not easily cowed like she was as a kit

Family(optional): n/a

Any significant details of background:

Found as an anbandoned runt of a rogue (if that’s ok) and while taken in by whichever clan you’d like still remains very small as an adult. She dislikes battle training and while she comes to be passable at it it’s never her strong point but her quiet and still nature make her a born hunter. Despite some thoughts she might be more suited as a medicine cat she’s a dedicated warrior once she finally gets there

Other: You can put her in any clan if you want let me know I guess either way I’ll be enjoying this fic!

name Flamepaw. about to be flamefur
Gender: female
Appearance: Apprentice
Personality: brave, kind, loyal.
details: Flamepaw is a ginger cat with green eyes and when her fur stands up, It is like fire, so if you touch it, you will be burned. she also has wings and the power to burn everything her paws touch.
Background knowledge:
Flamepaw was forest born and is very popular for her loyalty. She has suffered family loss and now is best friends with nobody. she just so happens to be popular, but she doesn't want friends that will hurt her even more. Sensitive on the inside, but tough on the outside. smart and wise.

This chapter was amazing, I am really enjoying reading this story.
I feel really bad for Sharppaw, it must suck having to live during a huge war

Happy Thanksgiving to you too!
It's going to be interesting to see how everything is after the blizzard

[Swiftsight was panting, as soon as she heard the news she had been running]

This is a comma splice. You need to split this sentence in two or use a different transition.

["Are you okay?" He asked]

If there’s a speech verb, it’s not considered the start of a new sentence, so 'he' shouldn't be capitalized.

["I can keep going "]

Punctuation goes inside the quotes.

If you don't already have a beta/proof-reader, find one. A good one is an endless supply of help in every situation, from plotting to punctuation.

That blizzard sound like a nasty one. Hope it dies down soon.

Birdkit is adorable.

Aww, Birdkit is so adorable, I love how she didn't want to make her mother sad.
You also wrote Plumpaw PERFECTLY!

Poor Swiftsight.

Even though it was short, it was still really good :)
I feel really bad for Sharppaw, especially Mousepaw giving him grief.
Tulipspots is written perfectly in the scene that she's in

You did submit ocs for my story so I mind as well return the favor. For Lakeclan unless taken than any other.
Tornstar- Brown she-cat with white flecks and Amber eyes
She is a *charming psychopath. She seems respectful and nice, but is murderous and evil on the inside. 8 lives left but been leader for a long time.
Deputy- Thistleheart
-Gray and white spiky Tom with Amber eyes.
He is a *violent psychopath who is calm at first, but gets extremely angry extremely fast. Loves murder.
Tornstar's brother.

*Types of Psychopaths
Violent- No regard for anything besides hurting and killing. Only feels anger. More noticeable.
Charming- Is extremely smart and charming towards other's. Kills more secretly and brutally. Blends in better