The part with Kurama has me in tears.

I'm torn between how interesting the more realistic portrayal of just how dark a shinobi, especially a city run by them, likely would be. While on the other hand, I am also waiting for anyone other than the oc and her relative to show some redeeming qualities.

ooooo first chapter and I'm already hooked

Very intrigueing story.
Love the OC's

Konoha is an airport with all the baggage everyone is carrying around. THAT reunion is going to be something.

There is something to be said for the "upfront-ness" of all the other villages' horribleness.

Ah well at least Kita can be comforted by the not-yet douche youth.

Oh wow what’s gonna happen? I’m rubbing my hands together in anticipation; I’m so excited

Hello, I read all chapters in one go And it was awesome, Thank you for this amazing story, I hope you will update soon

Loving this! I'm excited to see what happened next!

All of the kudos!

Nice!

i love everything about this! i'm interested to see how the taishi connection plays out. can't wait for the next update

Plz continue! Love eveything so far !:)

Hokage abortion bonus, I doubt that minato would approve such plan. Either it's a misunderstanding on both parts or it's Implying that the 3rd is more of true ninja leader.

This story is very well written, if I didn't Know about the story Naruto, I would have believed this to be a stand alone.

Sarutobi Hiruzen is a bit out of character here, he is a very indecisive person who value every citizen under his care. He wouldn't dare to consider using poison to bedridden someone.

However if someone under him we're to do it without his knowledge (danzo), is another thing.

Whhhaaaat it wasnt danzo stealing the eyes?

Obito? Orochimaru? Ohhhh the plot thickens

I hope Kita's life will become better tho!